An example of when to use hans/hendes/dens/dets would be something like this "Han hjælper hans/hendes mor" meaning "He helps his/hers mother". In this case it is helping someone elses mothers. To be honest, many if not most, Danes also struggles with this grammatical principle. If I were you, I wouldnt worry too much about it. Most Danes cant see when it's wrong anyways. Use what feels right to you and if it's wrong, you will get corrected and over time you will get a sense of when to use what. That's unfortunately the best advice I can give :(

Please check my grammar errors

Given is a diagram showing how Australian teenagers' preference for fast food of fish and chips, hamburgers and pizzas changed between 1975 and 2000. The overall trend we can see from the graph is that hamburgers and pizzas were rising, while fish and chips were falling in the given period.

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<em>Very well written!!</em>

I'm afraid that I can't do well.

I'm afraid that I can't do well.

I have a plan to go to U.S for a year.
So I'm afraid that I can't live alone without any friends and family.

How can I make some friends in U.S?

Do you know any community sites?

 

Another way to have written this would be like this:

I'm afraid whether or not I can do well.
I'm afraid whether or not I can do well.

I have a plan to go to U.S for a year.
So I'm afraid whether or not I can live alone without any friends and family.

 

How can I make some friends in U.S?

 

Do you know any community sites?

<em>They have slightly different meanings, the two texts. The first one you state that you are afraid or nervous because you do not think you can do it. The second text you are nervous or afraid because you are not sure if you can or not. I hope this helps, if you have any questions, dont hesitate to ask me ^_^</em>

What happened in Seoul plaza?

Seoul is the capital of South Korea. I've worked in a cityhall as a tour guide.

These days, some people have been opposed to the homosexual festival supposed to be held on 9th June at Seoul plaza located in front of the cityhall building.

The mayor of Seoul permitted the festival to be held in Seoul plaza.

They have demonstrated against the festival for a few months.

Everyday they scream out to make people agree with their opinion.

It is so disrupting that I cannot concentrate on my work. No matter how many times* people ask policemen to stop the demonstration, they couldn't do stop it and** in South Korea the religious freedom is guaranteed.

 

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*I am not sure exactly what you meant in this instance, but something had to be added. Adding "many times" it changes the sentence to mean that people asked a lot, but with no effect.

 

**You might want to consider changing this word to "because". They couldnt stop the demonstration because religious freedom is guaranteed in South Korea? If it's not "because" and you just wanted to add it as additional information, you could start a new sentence and write "In addition, in South Korea religious freedom is guaranteed."