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Given is a diagram showing how Australian teenagers' preference for fast food of fish and chips, hamburgers and pizzas changed between 1975 and 2000. The overall trend we can see from the graph is that hamburgers and pizzas were upward, while fish and chips were downward in the given period
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please check my grammar errors
Given is a diagram showing how Australian teenagers' preference for fast food of fish and chips, hamburgers and pizzas changed between 1975 and 2000. The overall trend we can see from the graph is that the popularity of hamburgers and pizzasw ent upward, while the demand for fish and chips went downward in the given period.
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Please check my grammar errors
Given is a diagram showing how Australian teenagers' preference for fast food of fish and chips, hamburgers and pizzas changed between 1975 and 2000. The overall trend we can see from the graph is that hamburgers and pizzas were rising, while fish and chips were falling in the given period.
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