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    露營,we do not use 露營,you should use yeyou(野游)instead of 露营,many words you used is chinese-traditional characters,but we do not use them now,it is difficut to write.釣魚(钓鱼)

    昨天,我去露營(野游)了。我的姐姐的丈夫姐夫和他的兒子跟去了一起去的。我去釣魚了,但是我沒有釣到魚。我很傷心了delete this word。:'(
    我旁邊的人们在篝火边彈吉他。
    我看到了觀一個鴨和一個鵝。我拍照了它们! (it is two ducks,no goose )
    我想再一次去!

     

     

     

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    June 8, 2015
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    好久不见~

    My Chinese teacher asked me to write a letter to my "ex-boyfriend" saying that I still like him. I've already written mine, but I would like to surprise her with a good Chinese. I will tell her I was not the one who wrote it afterwards. Therefore, may you translate this entry for me, please?

    "I still remember the first time we talked. Even though both of us were shy, you gathered all the strength you had and asked me if I wanted to be your girlfriend. We didn't spend much time together, because life led us to different ways. It is funny how I still get myself smiling when thinking of you. You made me feel like the luckiest person in the world, other people aren't able to make me feel the same way. Sometimes, at night, I look at the ceiling and keep wondering how your life is going, if you are happy, what you are doing. Can't we go back to the time we thought nothing could tear us apart? I feel sad because, even though we can't be together, I know I still love you. I just hope you will be able to find a good person and have a happy life!"

     

     

    我一直记得我们第一次说话的时候,虽然我们都很害羞,但是你还是鼓足勇气问了我,可想不想做你的女朋友。我们在一起时间不长,因为生活让我们走向了不同的道路。有趣的是我还是会想你的时候微笑,因为只有你才可以让我觉得自己是这个世界上最幸福的人。有时候,晚上我躺在床上,看着天花板,一直在想你的生活是什么样的,你快乐吗?你正在做什么?我们还可以回到过去吗?回到什么都不可以分开我们的过去。我觉得很伤心,因为就算我们不能在一起,我还一直爱着你。我只希望将来你可以找到一个很好的女孩儿,过幸福的生活!

     

    if you give this to your teacher ,she will think you are bad student,you are lie.try to write yourself please,i hope you can write in chinese some day.

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    June 3, 2015
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    投资(对话)

    虎先生: 嘿,狮子先生!好久不见!
    狮子先生:嘿,老虎。好久不见,好久不见(we do not use 好久不见twice)。
    虎先生:最近好吗?(do not ask two question together)我看你还在美国,啊呢(ues 呢instead of 啊)?

     

    狮子先生:是的。

    虎先生:真不敢想象(This is a miracle)

    这是个神迹 。

    狮子先生:哈哈。是啊,是啊。最近挺好的。你呢? (use 你过得这么样?instead of 你呢,it is  clearly)
    虎先生:很好啊。我怎么(this怎么meaning doubt others,so delete it)听说你买了一个酒店呢(ask with tone )?
    狮子先生:嗯。我买了一个小的(many adv should not add 的 )酒店。我已经出租了每一套房间(我全都租出去了i  rented out all of them)。 

    虎先生:真的?!这么快!真行厉害。
    狮子先生:嗯,嗯。你那边儿呢,最近发生了什么事儿怎么样?
    虎先生:我这(add 段)时间一直在休息。你看,我已经都老了,必须好好照顾自己的健康。
    狮子先生:哈哈。就是那是,那是。嘿,我明天有一个投资者的会议。我们将会谈一些公司的情况。你可以应该参加了。
    虎先生:是吗?在哪儿呢?
    狮子先生:在大中央车站附近的大都会人寿大厦。
    虎先生:那好。我会去的(add this 的 can be more polite)。
    狮子先生:有的人会推荐一些公司。我将谈美联储的可能性的加息的情况,并且我们怎么才能投资一些金融工具。
    虎先生:你是不是要谈债券这方面的东西?
    狮子先生:哈哈。等明天吧。嘿,老虎,我还有事儿。我要去歌剧院。明天见啊。
    虎先生:好的。明天见。

     

    Your Chinese is very well, if I were you ,i will write like above,if you have any problem reply ,i will do my best to  help you.

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    June 3, 2015
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  • Answered
    用dhl邮寄东西,多少钱一公斤?
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    June 2, 2015
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  • Corrected

    室外运动

    昨天晚上我的italki老师教了我一个新词。

    那时候我们在聊运动。 我很喜欢去健身馆,所以我经常去健身馆。 我的老师问我:你也喜欢室外运动吗? 我不知道室外运动是什么意思。 其实,当时,我不知道“室外”的意思,但是我知道了“室内”,因为我很喜欢室内攀岩! 我就知道室外的意思了,所以我就问了她: 室外运动吗? 踢足球是一个室外运动吗? 她就回答了“对!”。我就回答了”不喜欢,虽然我是英国人,我真不喜欢踢足球阿!“。

    看起来我不喜欢室外运动。但是!最后我想起来我很喜欢跑步。跑步去酒吧! 喝啤酒是我最爱的运动! 干杯!

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    June 2, 2015
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    The second on italki today is my scond day on italki,I like italki very much.I wrote a note yesterday,BOB replied my note, and gave me some advice,he told me that you foreigner do not use qq and wechat as a conmunication soft ,so i register a skype id,my skype id is dreameranddoer2 ,if you want study Chinese and you can speak English,add my skype please.I always free from 20:00to 24:00,time of BEIJING.At this time we can practice our language.
    June 2, 2015
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  • Answered
    将由 is two words,将means flew days later,由According to the passive.
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    June 1, 2015
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    Frist day on italki Today is my frist day on italki ,I fill my basic information online .I want to find a friend who can teach me English,but it difficult for me,no body add me as friend until now,why?Can you tell me the reason?Are you sleeping this time in your country?Add me please ,My Chinese is well,we can help each other.My qq number is 395317590 and my wechat number is liucc0805.Do you use these chat tools?Chinese use them almost everyday.
    June 1, 2015
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