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Gillian
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Jul 6, 2019
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    October 29, 2016
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    我居住住居的城市 (1)

    我住在一座坐叫做斯特拉斯堡(Strasbourg)的城市。這座城市的人口比中國的平均的城市更太小(最好改为人口规模,人口用小来形容不太恰当,或者直接说人口更少;另外“平均的城市”也不太恰当,可以说普通城市,或者说这座城市的人口规模比中国城市的平均人口规模更小,要准确表达very small也可以说“要小很多”),因為只才有六十萬人(or 因为才六十万)。斯特拉斯堡位於法國的東北部。另外,它還是離德國的國境(国界 or 边界is better)很近,只才有五公里!騎自行車需要差不多十五分鐘。

    才 is only used when there is some premise

    e.g.

    只有努力才会有收获

     有目标才有动力

    只有读过这本书才能理解当初他为什么要选择弃医从文

    The city I live in

    I live in a city called Strasbourg. This city's population is very small compared to an average chinese city, only 600 000 people. Strasbourg is located in the north-east of France. Also, it's very close to the german border, only 5 kilometers! By bicycle it only takes about 15 minutes to get there.

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    October 4, 2016
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    September 19, 2016
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