Wrong idea about freedom in some countries.

After the question to remind story about your family, After the question to remind your family about a story?  I started thinking about the closest friend from my relative I started thinking about my closest friend who was also my relative/ OR/ I started thinking about the closest friend from my family. I remembered my cousin Ahmed. Ahmed and I went to the primary school at the same time because we were the same age. I spent my childhood with him. When I was 16 years old, Ahmed left the school. I became very sad because my close friend left me alone. After that, he got married. I proceeded continued my life and I completed my high school. Then I started my college life. While I was studying in university, Ahmed called me and he said,'' I would marry the second women "I will marry my second wife, I wanted to invite you to the party.'' I was surprised about that because his age 21 years he was 21 years old and he got had two wives. Ahmed's brother was 15 years old who married with Ahmed on the same day. Until now I could not imagine that how my uncle let his children left the leave school and got get  marriage at this age. Now Ahmed has two wives with 8 children without work, without goals. He told me that,'' I regret about following my desire and leaving the school.'' I think that he did not know about his future and that was responsible for irresponsible of his father (my uncle). My uncle was a bad leader for his family because he did not think about the children's future. Now his family is considered as broken family. You already said family in that sentence so you don't need to say it again. That is an example, explain the bad freedom from the parents.  This is an example that explains the bad kind of freedom that comes from parents. 

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Social Media

As opposed to be all day on social media, As opposed to being on social media all day why don't we talk with the people who is  are truly with us.
Recently I got really upset with my mom, because I was telling her some quite interesting facts. Recently I got really upset with my mom, because I was telling her some very interesting facts./ Or / Recently I got really upset with my mom, because I was telling her some facts that are quite interesting. 
I thougtht she was paying attention, suddenly I realized she was just shadowing unconsciously what I was saying. But she was actualy actually on Facebook. 
Social media s not necesary synonymus with the relationship's decadency, there are cases where social media make it stronger.
In terms of my relationship with my mother I think it coul  could improve if both of us pay mora more  attention to each other than to social media.

Suddenly: This word is used to show that you were surprised something happened and usually used in a more exciting context. 

You write very well and will be fluent soon! :)

Still Think About How to Expand Vocabulary

I practised speaking with a language partner recently. She was really impressive. She heard me and was understandable most of the time, because she's already got a fairly large vocabulary. I often learn something important from other learners, especially someone learning Japanese because it is sometimes easy to make out what is necessary or not. This time I seem to have finally understood how important a wide vocabulary is. There is sometimes nothing to say just because I haven't got a considerable amount of vocabulary. It's time to face this issue.
By the way, the title of this post is How to Expand Vocabulary, but I've just written about how important vocabulary is. I'm still trying to find out my best way of learning it.

I'd be happy if you'd take some time to read this writing, correct it, or tell me better alternative expressions.