Wrong idea about freedom in some countries.
After the question to remind story about your family, I started thinking about the closest friend from my relative. I remembered my cousin Ahmed. Ahmed and I went to the primary school at the same time because we were the same age. I spent my childhood with him. When I was 16 years old, Ahmed left the school. I became very sad because my close friend left me alone. After that, he got married. I proceeded my life and I completed my high school. Then I started my college life. While I was studying in university, Ahmed called me and he said,'' I would marry the second women, I wanted to invite you to the party.'' I was surprised about that because his age 21 years and he got two wives. Ahmed's brother was 15 years old who married with Ahmed on the same day. Until now I could not imagine that how my uncle let his children left the school and got marriage at this age. Now Ahmed has two wives with 8 children without work, without goals. He told me that,'' I regret about following my desire and leaving the school.'' I think that he did not know about his future and that was responsible for his father (my uncle). My uncle was a bad leader for his family because he did not think about the children's future. Now his family considered as broken family. That is an example, explain the bad freedom from the parents.
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Wrong Idea About Freedom (in some countries)
After the idea to remember a story about your family, I started thinking about my closest friend and relative, Ahmed. Ahmed and I went to the primary school at the same time because we were the same age. I spent my childhood with him. When I was 16 years old Ahmed left school. I became very sad because my closest friend left me all alone. Soon after that, he got married. I proceeded on with my life and I completed high school. Then I started my college life. While I was studying in university, Ahmed called me and said,'' I am marrying a second women and I wanted to invite you to the party.'' I was surprised about that because he was 21 years old and now he has two wives! Also, Ahmed's brother was 15 years old who married on the same day as Ahmed. Until now I could not imagine how my uncle let his children leave school and get marriage at this age (so young). Now Ahmed has two wives with 8 children without work, without goals. He told me that,'' I regret the choices I made and leaving the school.'' I think that he did not know about his future and that he was responsible for his father (my uncle). My uncle was a bad leader for his family because he did not think about his children's future. Now his family is considered a "broken family". That is an example, explain the bad freedom from the parents.***********I am having difficulty correcting this sentence.
(This is an example of making the wrong decision to get freedom from your parents). Is this what you wanted to say?
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Wrong idea about freedom in some countries.
After the question to remind story about your family, After the question to remind your family about a story? I started thinking about the closest friend from my relative I started thinking about my closest friend who was also my relative/ OR/ I started thinking about the closest friend from my family. I remembered my cousin Ahmed. Ahmed and I went to the primary school at the same time because we were the same age. I spent my childhood with him. When I was 16 years old, Ahmed left the school. I became very sad because my close friend left me alone. After that, he got married. I proceeded continued my life and I completed my high school. Then I started my college life. While I was studying in university, Ahmed called me and he said,'' I would marry the second women "I will marry my second wife, I wanted to invite you to the party.'' I was surprised about that because his age 21 years he was 21 years old and he got had two wives. Ahmed's brother was 15 years old who married with Ahmed on the same day. Until now I could not imagine that how my uncle let his children left the leave school and got get marriage at this age. Now Ahmed has two wives with 8 children without work, without goals. He told me that,'' I regret about following my desire and leaving the school.'' I think that he did not know about his future and that was responsible for irresponsible of his father (my uncle). My uncle was a bad leader for his family because he did not think about the children's future. Now his family is considered as broken family. You already said family in that sentence so you don't need to say it again. That is an example, explain the bad freedom from the parents. This is an example that explains the bad kind of freedom that comes from parents.Good Job! :)
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OMG this is really sad story.
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