Wuzheng–Ancient Town Of River
Wuzhen is one of the ancient water towns in Zhejiang province, which is nearly located in the Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal. 这句话非限制定语从句最好不要放在后面，zhejiang province 也是名词，容易让人以为从句是修饰 zhejiang province 的，可以将其处理为插入语：Wuzhen,closing to Beijing-Hangzhou Grand Canal,is one of the ancient water towns in Zhejiang province. "nearly located"太中式英语了，表达离得近可以用“close to”.
It's such a fascinating place with lots of old bridges and restaurants and hotels, and all of them are filled with Chinese traditional color.
注意句子中“and”的用法，一般是sth,sth and sth....and是连接词，一般连接属性相同的词语或句子，所以后面的句子不能用and，因为后面句子是形容前面几个词的，所以考虑用分词或定语从句。As lots of old bridges,restaurants and hotels are filled with Chinese traditional color,it's such a fascinating place.这样改是因为前后两句是因果关系。注意as 和with 用在句首的区别。
In the past one thousand years, people who live in Wuzhen have a similar lifestyle like their numerous ancestors, besides, Wuzhen's river system seems has remained unchanged.
第一句话不完整，你想说人们还保持着和其祖先一样的生活方式，like sb后面少东西。ppl who lived in Wuzhen are keeping a same lifestyle like what their ancestors had.定语从句处理成分词形式最好。后面分句和前面的没有逻辑关系，所以另起一句。
Besides,the river system of Wuzhen has remained unchanging.
So it's apparently that Wuzhen is a charming museum which displays a part of Chinese civilization.All the houses here are made from stones and woods.
前后逻辑混乱，后面是原因，前面是结果。定语从句关系代词错误，应该是in which/where,charming museum不和逻辑。由于两个句子有逻辑关系，所以可以合并成一个复合句。Wuzhen,displaying a part of Chinese civilization, is apparently like a magical museum,because all the houses there are all made from stones and woods.
The local people have been building their houses and markets beside rivers for several hundreds years. Countless spacious and beautiful courtyards are hidden in present buildings, which makes travelers become surprised no matter wherever they go.
两句话明显说的是一回事。因为人们临河造房使空间和田野越来越少，所以可以放在一句话里说。
The missing of spaces and beautiful courtyards as for several handreds years ppl have been building their houses and markets on them makes travelers wonder where have they gone.
no matter where=wherever
