As a Birthday Present

My boyfriend gave me a portable keyboard as a birthday present.

Hi Hisako! Excellently written! Your improvement is very clear from one notebook entry to the next. Keep up the good work!

As a Birthday Present

Hi Hisako, 

Your messages are very clear, and I made slight amendments. We don't say that we "type" using an interactive surface. So, I changed it to "interactive keyboard". I also inserted the indefinite article "a" to describe the cafe because there are no specific details about the cafe. Thirdly, we use the compound adjective (newly-opened) to describe the Starbucks outlet near your residence. Lastly, I assume that "them" is referring to your laptop and portable keyboard. Thus, I grouped them and used the word "gadgets" to describe them. 

Hope all these help you. 

Cheers, 
Lance

Ps I like your positivity when you write "I wonder what I will study today." :) 

As a Birthday Present

My Birthday Present

I have a tablet   (have already had)but I didn't really use it (very often)because it's difficult to (it can't)type smoothly.

But now,(since) I have a portable keyboard which is very  so light so thatI'm able to could bring my tablet and the keyboard to cafe to study English!
Since there is a new opened Starbucks near my house, I will go there with them.
I wonderam looking forward to what I will am going to study today.