Essay. Please feedback. Advantages and disadvantages of bottled water against tap water.
This essay compares the advantages and disadvantages of tap water against bottled water.
Although some people prefer to drink bottled water, I strongly recommend drinking tap water or buying bottled water in a bulk quantities and avoiding the use of little bottles.
Personally, I refuse to use a little bottles. I prefer to buy 5 gallons of bottled water for the following reasons. Firstly, consuming liquids in small bottles generates huge quantities of trash. Secondly, the big companies manufacture the demand for bottled water with ads which turn the public against the tap water.
To support my first point, I need to say that large quantities of plastic are needed it to meet butters the demand, because on average a person human drinks at least two litres of water daily diary, therefore, at least 2 bottles are going to the trash. As a result a person can generate 730 bottles of plastic each year that is trash for our world. We have to stop it. If we do not start to take the control of our environment, we'll kill the earth and ourselves as well.
On the other hand, a useful way to transport water is keeping it in a bottle. In that case, try to use the container more than one time and when you finish using it, take it to a recycle center or use the bottle to collect rain water.
To my second point, the big industry of bottled water make us think that their water is better than tap water. For example they tell and show us with a diverse channels of communications that their water has a better taste because they are enriched with salts and minerals to improve our health. Moreover, they sell the idea of a better status of life with their brands of water, even though they know perfectly well that the government regulates the quality of tap water for the public's protection.
On the other hand, we can refuse insist that investments are made by the companies for research to study how water can be enhanced to meet needs of the human bodyrcise.
To sum it up, choosing to drink tap water can have a big positive impact on our environment and the longevity of humans beings on the earth.0 votedApril 3, 20180- Hey Luis, I love the heading to your question! :) I dont claim to be clever but here are some examples for what you are trying to communicate. Do you mean that the English class begins on February 11th? Do you mean that the English class starts on February 11th? Do you mean February 11th is when the English class begins? (or starts) You'd be understood if you used 'commences' but it is not usually used that way.0 votedJanuary 23, 20180
Hey Salva,
"Hello, nice to meet you" or "I am fine, and you?" are traditional and you cant go wrong with using them especially when meeting someone for the first time. The others are informal greetings such as "Hi, what's up? How're you doing? What's happening? What's going on?" You can use them when meeting someone for the first time informally but they are better used with people you already know. 'Howdy' is understood by everyone anywhere in the US but it is a more regional greeting used in the southwest part of the US. Hope that helps!
0 votedJanuary 23, 20180My 29th birthday
My birthday was yesterday on the 17th of January. I worked a normal day. I woke up at 5:45 as usual. I exercised. I had Nesquik and biscuits for breakfast. I brushed my teeth. I had a shower and put on my uniform. My mother congratulated me and I went to work by car. It seemed like a normal day but it's my birthday. I did every task as usual at work. I had to go to office to pick up goods. I decided to buy chocolate cupcake assortment, cookies and orange juice. I wanted to invite my workmates. I picked up the goods and I left the food at the company dining room. The workmates was glad and celebrated with me. After that, I went to English class. I gave the assortment of food to myclassmates for my birthday.After class, I went to my house because it was late and I had to work today. This weekend I will be celebrating my birthday with my friends.
Nice job! Very well done! There are a number of ways you can say what you are trying to say. I made corrections as I would say it but they were all very minor correcitons ¡Feliz cumpleaños! Stan
0 votedJanuary 18, 20181
