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My 29th birthday My birthday it was yesterday on 17th of January. I worked as a normal day. I woke up at 5:45 as usual. I did exercise. I had Nesquik and biscuits for breakfast. I brushed my teeth. I had shower and put on my uniform. My mother congratulated me and I went to work by car. It seems a normal day but it's my birthday. I did every task as usual at work. I had to go to office to pick up goods. I decided to buy chocolate cupcake, assortment, cookies and orange juice. I wanted to invite to my workmates. When I picked up the goods and I left the food at company dining room. The workmates was glading and celebrating me. After that, I went to English class. I gave assortment to classmates for my birthday.

After class, I went to my house because it was late and I had to work today. This weekend I will celebrating my birthday with my friends.

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My 29th birthday

My birthday was yesterday on the 17th of January. I worked a normal day. I woke up at 5:45 as usual. I  exercised. I had Nesquik and biscuits for breakfast. I brushed my teeth. I had a shower and put on my uniform. My mother congratulated me and I went to work by car. It seemed like  a normal day but it's my birthday. I did every task as usual at work. I had to go to office to pick up goods. I decided to buy chocolate cupcake assortment, cookies and orange juice. I wanted to invite  my workmates.  I picked up the goods and I left the food at the company dining room. The workmates was glad and celebrated with me. After that, I went to English class. I gave the assortment of food to myclassmates for my birthday.

After class, I went to my house because it was late and I had to work today. This weekend I will be celebrating my birthday with my friends.



Nice job!  Very well done! There are a number of ways you can say what you are trying to say.  I made corrections as I would say it but they were all very minor correcitons  ¡Feliz cumpleaños! Stan

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Thank you very much!! How are you??
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Happy birthday to you !

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