Essay. Please feedback. Advantages and disadvantages of bottled water against tap water.
This essay compares the advantages and disadvantages of tap water against bottled water.
Although some people prefer to drink bottled water, I strongly recommend to drink water of the tap or try to buy bottled water in a bulky quantities and avoid to use a little bottle.
Personally, I refuse to use a little bottle and I prefer to buy 5 gallons of bottled water for the next couple of reasons. Firstly, consume liquids in a small bottle provoke a huge quantities of trash. Secondly, the big companies manufacture the demand with ads which scaring off the public and against the tap water.
For support my first point, I need to say that a big quantities of plastic are needed it to butters the demand, because, in average a human drinks at least two litres of water diary, therefore, at least 2 bottles are going to the trash, and if we multiply for a month and as result a human can generate 730 bottles of plastic and that is a waste of trash for our world and we have to stop it.If we not start to take the control of our environment, we'll kill the earth and the humans beings.
On the other hand, a useful way to transport water is keeping in a bottle. In that case, try to use the container more than one time and when you finish to use it, you must throw it in a recycle place or use the bottle as a collector of rain water.
To my second point. The big industry of bottled water are med us think that their water is better than tap water. for example they tell and show us with a diverse channels of communicate that their water have a better tasty due to are enriched with sals and minerals to improve our health. Moreover, they sell the idea of a better status life with their brands of water. Even though, they know perfectly that the government regulate the quality of the tap water in our benefit.
On the other hand, we can refuse that the field to study the water are improved with the investment of companies. For instance, the brand of Gatorade could create a water with features to help to recover quickly the energy wasted in exercise.
At sum it up, to choose to drink of the tap water can create a big impact to our environment and the permanency of the humans beings in the earth.
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Essay. Please feedback. Advantages and disadvantages of bottled water against tap water.
This essay compares the advantages and disadvantages of tap water against bottled water.Although some people prefer to drink bottled water, I strongly recommend drinking tap water or buying bottled water in a bulk quantities and avoiding the use of little bottles.
Personally, I refuse to use a little bottles. I prefer to buy 5 gallons of bottled water for the following reasons. Firstly, consuming liquids in small bottles generates huge quantities of trash. Secondly, the big companies manufacture the demand for bottled water with ads which turn the public against the tap water.
To support my first point, I need to say that large quantities of plastic are needed it to meet butters the demand, because on average a person human drinks at least two litres of water daily diary, therefore, at least 2 bottles are going to the trash. As a result a person can generate 730 bottles of plastic each year that is trash for our world. We have to stop it. If we do not start to take the control of our environment, we'll kill the earth and ourselves as well.
On the other hand, a useful way to transport water is keeping it in a bottle. In that case, try to use the container more than one time and when you finish using it, take it to a recycle center or use the bottle to collect rain water.
To my second point, the big industry of bottled water make us think that their water is better than tap water. For example they tell and show us with a diverse channels of communications that their water has a better taste because they are enriched with salts and minerals to improve our health. Moreover, they sell the idea of a better status of life with their brands of water, even though they know perfectly well that the government regulates the quality of tap water for the public's protection.
On the other hand, we can refuse insist that investments are made by the companies for research to study how water can be enhanced to meet needs of the human bodyrcise.
To sum it up, choosing to drink tap water can have a big positive impact on our environment and the longevity of humans beings on the earth.
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Essay. Please feedback. Advantages and disadvantages of bottled water against tap water.
This essay compares the advantages and disadvantages of tap water against bottled water.Although some people prefer to drink bottled water, I strongly recommend to drink water out of the tap or try to buy bottled water in bulk quantities and avoid using a little bottle.
Personally, I refuse to use a little bottle and I prefer to buy 5 gallons of bottled water for following reasons. Firstly, consume liquids in a small bottle provoke huge quantities of trash. Secondly, the big companies manufacture the demand with ads which are scaring off the public against the use of tap water.
To support my first point, I need to say that big quantities of plastic are needed it to butters the demand, because in average a human drinks at least two litres of water diary, therefore at least 2 bottles are going to the trash. And if we multiply for a month as a result a human can generate 730 bottles of plastic and that is a waste of trash for our world and we have to stop it.If we don't start to take control of our environment, we'll kill the earth and the human beings.
On the other hand, a useful way to transport water is keeping in a bottle. In that case, try to use the container more than one time and when you finish to use it, you must throw it in a recycle place or use the bottle as a collector of rain water.
To my second point. The big industry of bottled water are med us think that their water is better than tap water. for example they tell and show us with a diverse channels of communicate that their water have a better tasty due to are enriched with sals and minerals to improve our health. Moreover, they sell the idea of a better status life with their brands of water. Even though, they know perfectly that the government regulate the quality of the tap water in our benefit.
On the other hand, we can refuse that the field to study the water are improved with the investment of companies. For instance, the brand of Gatorade could create a water with features to help to recover quickly the energy wasted in exercise.
At sum it up, to choose to drink of the tap water can create a big impact to our environment and the permanency of the humans beings in the earth.
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