Fading flowers....

You are at in the spring of the whole lifetime, what on earth makes your appear appearance like withered autumn leaves? fall-looking . Perhaps, it is because the deeply love is was lost hsuddenly just as a pretty mirror is was destroiyed.

　你的生命正值春天
　为什么，显出秋叶的容颜
　只因为那面美丽的镜子
　打碎了你的深深眷恋

sStrenching out your the hands, you cannot hold the moon in water,. similarly, So, turning back either cannot grasp his heart again how to reunite with my lost love with whom I long for a reconciliation?

　伸出双手
　捧不起水中的月亮
  重新回头，
  又如何能，破镜重圆

Yesterday is was only a memory, and the past has becomes recollections,. the things that is fading with time are not only fresh flowers , but also young girls. Not only fresh flowers but also beautiful girls are fading with time.

  昨日只能成为回忆
　往事也已化为纪念
　凋零的不止是鲜花
　还有红颜。。。

Your English actually is pretty good. You can clearly express your thoughts and your writing is coherent. You, however, need to pay attention to the details such as spelling, plural or singular etc. Overall, I can see your writing has improved. Don’t be pessimistic. Keep writing and keep up the good work!

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How to Learn a Language Well

How do you learn a new language well? most people says that, it takes only about 6 months to chat with others by in a new language.

But I know (that) a good deal of Chinese students spend 10 years or more in studying/learning English, but they can not speak even one entire complete sentence, aAlso they do not know that what others are talking about in Eglish.

I am one of them. I think I am one of them. It is the fitrst time I realizes that I know anything nothing about English, and can not help crying.

All people say just practice, then you can speak ....but Mmost of them do not know (that) almost all of cChinese students spend about 70% of theire school-time in studying/learning English, but get little they still make little progress.

I am frustrated, I am tired, very tired. If one gets nothing and makes no progress after long hard work, he will be tired and sad, so do am I.....

Hello Bear234,  

我感觉原文作者已经竭尽她的所能去争取还她家人一个公道和得到她家人所应有的补偿，但最终无法和社会的不公和相关部门的冷漠和不作为抗衡。 她绝望了，又没有家人可以倾诉，因为她自己就是她老母和小侄子的依靠，所以她要强装坚强。她到这里发泄一下心中的郁闷，有什么不可以吗？这不是煽情，这是她真实心里的感觉吧。

她弟弟车祸遇难，肇事者逃亡，无人理睬受伤的人。这类事也许在大城市不太会发生，但在中国的许多地方还是会发生的。 自从彭宇案之后，中国人的大多数心态都是不要去“管闲事”，因为自己可能被“坑”。 这种心态背后的逻辑是“如果不是你做的，你为什么好心去管？肯定跟你有关系， 所以你要负责，要付医药费”。 可笑吗？的确。 但的的确确这是现在中国大多数人的意识形态。  如果有人及时打电话叫救护，也许她弟弟还有生还的希望。作者又有什么必要在这里夸大其词呢？她就是希望当时如果，哪怕有一个人帮个忙，她弟弟也许就不会死亡了。

之后，作者要找到肇事凶手，明显当地警察局没有破案。作者只好求助于网络，但没人提供线索。事情就这样不了了之。你让她去控告当地警察局不最为吗？她敢吗？

作者说她去保险公司申报她弟弟死亡的意外险赔偿。在被有关部门忽悠之后，准备了许多材料，最后她才知道其实她弟弟根本没有意外险。他弟弟工作的企业欺骗职工，说给他们上意外险，实际上是和保险公司做了一个交易。也就是，企业的职工交钱通过企业买意外险，但是企业根本没有给他们买。 你觉得，这个企业光天华日之下，明目张胆欺骗职工，这样做会担心被职工告吗？就是因为企业的管理者心里明白，没人拿他们怎么样，才这样胆大包天。

至于死者的养老金，按照国家规定每月从每个职工工资里扣除，由企业连同企业所付担部分一起集中上交社保局，每个上交养老金的人都有一个养老金个人账户。 她弟弟的情况是，企业扣除了职工的养老金，但并没有上交，所以她弟弟的养老金个人账户里没有钱。虽然国家规定，未成年子女可以领取过世父母养老金到十八岁，但因为账户上没钱，也就没钱可领，让一个十岁孩子无所依靠。 这种做法明显是企业违法国家规定。 再一次，这个企业这样做不是一时的，他们既然这样做了，就不会害怕你去告。还有，这些职工的养老金都去哪了？

你的话听上去很义正严词，要求作者寻求法律途径，但是似乎你主观臆断，并不了解中国大多数地方的真实社会情况，。在中国非大城市的地方，哪个企业不是和各个政府部门有千丝万缕的关系，一个受了冤屈的百姓，怎么可能通过法律途径争取自己应得的利益？又有哪个律师会接受这种注定打不起的案子？ 老百姓只是希望每天平平安安，不出事就好了。

最后，我希望你对弱势群体有一些同情心吧。就这个例子，作者的家庭因为丧失了一个主要挣钱的人，经济条件突然恶化，要争取得到一直交钱买的意外险赔偿，真相是企业根本一直在欺骗这些职工，没有为他们上意外险。 作者希望从弟弟的养老金里取钱抚养弟弟的儿子，真相是企业一直从职工工资里扣除养老金，但并没有上交到社保局，所以她的小侄子无法领到一分钱。 在亲人离去，作者费劲周折找了各个有关部门，最后才知道这些真相。 她百感交集，”叫天不应叫地不灵“，写了一篇文来发泄心中的痛苦，这是应该值得同情而不是苛责的吧？

I'm trying to understand the thoughts of author and have added some languages by following the feelings of the author as well. 

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Maybe I cannot express my thoughts very well, but I will try my best to make myself clear.

I always think this is a warm world, and there are many people who are willing to devote sympathy and offer help to the people in tragic situations, and there is a government which can provide a fair system, but I think I am wrong.

I cannot do anything to fight. I just want to write my sorrow, frustration and anger, in order to feel a little bit better.

Several months ago, my only brother died in a hit and run accident. If even one person had called an ambulance, or a policeman, or if the cold blooded hit and run driver had not run away, maybe many things would be different. But, a big but, there was no help, no call, and no doctor, nothing...And our life has ever changed since that day.

After that, the subsequent processes were dealing with my brother’s irresponsible company, deceitful insurance agency, and bureaucratic government for claiming money from my brother’s personal pension account, and filing an insurance claim. After hundreds of times attempts, however, we received nothing but ice-cold faces, indifferent attitude, lies, and excuses, making me and my elderly mother exhausted and devastated.

Though according to the law, both company and government have the responsibility to take care of the little son of my brother financially, but he could get nothing, not even a penny, and none of the company or the government cares.

I know it is unfair, and there is much more unfairness in my country, and there are many worse tragedies in my country, but knowing these won’t cheer me up.

I have written letters to many famous people in my country who labeled themselves a compassionate person, but none of them ever replied to me....What an indifferent and cold country I live in....

11 Not all the cries have never been responded..

Not All As You Said

Not all the trees are broken off by storms; Not all the seeds never discover soils to root; Not all the true love flows away into the heart-desert; Not all the dreams are willing to be have broken the swings. No, not all the things are as the same as you said.
不是一切大树，　　都被暴风折断；　　不是一切种子，　　都找不到生根的土壤；　　不是一切真情，　　都流失在人心的沙漠里；　　不是一切梦想，　　都甘愿被折掉翅膀。　　不，不是一切　　都像你说的那样！

Not all the flames only burns itself themselves without lighting others, but never radiate light; Not all the stars only mean darkness without but not forecasting （indicating？）the dawn ; Not all the songs only pass through the ears without but not staying in heart. No, not all the things are the as same as you said.

不是一切火焰，都只燃烧自己　　而不把别人照亮；不是一切星星，　　都仅指示黑暗　　而不报告曙光；不是一切歌声，　　都掠过耳旁, 而不留在心上。　　不，不是一切，都像你说的那样！

Not all the cries never been respondsed (answered?）; Not all the losses cannot be compansated; Not all the disappointing unfathomable abyss leads to death; Not all the defeats death pours down (belong to?）upon the weakers . No, not all the things are the as same as you said。
　　不是一切呼吁都没有回响； 不是一切损失都无法补偿；　　不是一切深渊都意味着灭亡；不是一切灭亡都覆盖在弱者头上。 不，不是一切，都像你说的那样！

1. love 不可数. All the love is...; All the love flows away...

2. flow into. 流入。  flow away 流出

3. Not all the dreams are willing to have broken swings. 如果to be broken，be broken后面跟 by..，被什么折断。这里不是被翅膀折断，所以去掉被动，改成 to have broken wings.

4. the same as. 象．．．一样.  没有as same as.  as...as 是象．．．一样. same 是一样. 没有“是象一样一样”这样说法。 如果用same， 就是 the same as.

5. flame 可以复数， ie. flames

6. radiate: emit (energy, especially light or heat) in the form of rays or waves. 这里有照亮的意思，不只是辐射。 所以觉得light 更好些。

7. 用without觉得更简洁, 更有两种动作同时发生的意思。（我的个人感觉）

8. response 名词。  respond 动词

9. the weak 弱者. 没有比较时就单指弱者，用the weak

10. pour down.  down 是介词，所以后面不应再跟一个upon另外一个介词。