11 Not all the cries have never been responded..

Not All As You Said

Not all the trees are broken off by storms; Not all the seeds never discover soils to root; Not all the true love flows away into the heart-desert; Not all the dreams are willing to be have broken the swings. No, not all the things are as the same as you said.
不是一切大树，　　都被暴风折断；　　不是一切种子，　　都找不到生根的土壤；　　不是一切真情，　　都流失在人心的沙漠里；　　不是一切梦想，　　都甘愿被折掉翅膀。　　不，不是一切　　都像你说的那样！

Not all the flames only burns itself themselves without lighting others, but never radiate light; Not all the stars only mean darkness without but not forecasting （indicating？）the dawn ; Not all the songs only pass through the ears without but not staying in heart. No, not all the things are the as same as you said.

不是一切火焰，都只燃烧自己　　而不把别人照亮；不是一切星星，　　都仅指示黑暗　　而不报告曙光；不是一切歌声，　　都掠过耳旁, 而不留在心上。　　不，不是一切，都像你说的那样！

Not all the cries never been respondsed (answered?）; Not all the losses cannot be compansated; Not all the disappointing unfathomable abyss leads to death; Not all the defeats death pours down (belong to?）upon the weakers . No, not all the things are the as same as you said。
　　不是一切呼吁都没有回响； 不是一切损失都无法补偿；　　不是一切深渊都意味着灭亡；不是一切灭亡都覆盖在弱者头上。 不，不是一切，都像你说的那样！

1. love 不可数. All the love is...; All the love flows away...

2. flow into. 流入。  flow away 流出

3. Not all the dreams are willing to have broken swings. 如果to be broken，be broken后面跟 by..，被什么折断。这里不是被翅膀折断，所以去掉被动，改成 to have broken wings.

4. the same as. 象．．．一样.  没有as same as.  as...as 是象．．．一样. same 是一样. 没有“是象一样一样”这样说法。 如果用same， 就是 the same as.

5. flame 可以复数， ie. flames

6. radiate: emit (energy, especially light or heat) in the form of rays or waves. 这里有照亮的意思，不只是辐射。 所以觉得light 更好些。

7. 用without觉得更简洁, 更有两种动作同时发生的意思。（我的个人感觉）

8. response 名词。  respond 动词

9. the weak 弱者. 没有比较时就单指弱者，用the weak

10. pour down.  down 是介词，所以后面不应再跟一个upon另外一个介词。