Your English actually is pretty good. You can clearly express your thoughts and your writing is coherent. You, however, need to pay attention to the details such as spelling, plural or singular etc. Overall, I can see your writing has improved. Don’t be pessimistic. Keep writing and keep up the good work!

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How to Learn a Language Well

How do you learn a new language well? most people says that, it takes only about 6 months to chat with others by in a new language.

But I know (that) a good deal of Chinese students spend 10 years or more in studying/learning English, but they can not speak even one entire complete sentence, aAlso they do not know that what others are talking about in Eglish.

I am one of them. I think I am one of them. It is the fitrst time I realizes that I know anything nothing about English, and can not help crying.

All people say just practice, then you can speak ....but Mmost of them do not know (that) almost all of cChinese students spend about 70% of theire school-time in studying/learning English, but get little they still make little progress.

I am frustrated, I am tired, very tired. If one gets nothing and makes no progress after long hard work, he will be tired and sad, so do am I.....