Could you please correct this email?

Dear Investors,

I am Carlos Anderson, a new finance manager for Koshin, Inc. This is to inform our investors that we are going to hold a meeting to give a release information about our new year strategies for the new year. As a new manager, I am very pleased to meet you.

The meeting will be held in the Koshin convention center on December 21, and the meeting time will begin at 2 PM. The meeting will be divided into three sections. First, I will briefly introduce is the brief introduction of myself, second, I will review is retrospect to this year, third is and finally, we will discuss our new strategy about for next year and the further future beyond. The whole section meeting will not be over last more than two hours, and there is will be a 15-minute break time about 15 minutes after the second section. And there will be a snack and beverages will be prepared for you.

For this meeting, we need to know the exact number attending. So please let me know whether you plan to attend or not. We really appreciate your support for our company. I hope to see you soon.

Best regards,

Carlos Anderson

Finance manager

Koshin.inc

The Rainy Day

It has begun to rain. I wanted there to be didn't want to have any troubles problems when I'd come on my way home, so I cut my way took a short route. There was a traffic light on the crossroad, so I wasted some time wait (or waiting. As I was standing there I saw a man running out of a shop. He disappeared in the rain. My wife wanted me home by eight, so that I hadn't I didn't have any time to think about this man.
Was he seen to Did anyone else see him go out besides me? I don't know.
I crossed some streets and stopped for a moment apposite opposite a building. It was an old factory.  I've never seen it work. I stepped on the road to cross it, but jumped back at once because I heard a car's car roaring in the dark. The car flew by me without ease its rice slowing down. 
When I got home at least last, I found it the door locked. I knocked at the door. I heard my knocking echoed echo. I was used to waiting like this, but tonight she my wife didn't come down to open the door (or the door open).
I have had been waiting for half an hour before it struck me that to day today was Sunday, and she was in at the theater with her friend, Julia.
I looked at my watch. It was nearly eight o'clock.
I sat down on the steps of the porch and was immediately lost in thought.
I didn't notice time pass and when I saw  the headlights me I thought, “Who's that?”
But when I smiled and come went to met meet my wife.
She kissed me warmly and asked me why I was outside. I explained her clear and she began to laugh.
“Why are you laughing?” I asked.
“I've I told you that I left the key under the carpet, don't you remember?”
I recalled at once our call phone conversation, and we both laughing come home in went inside, laughing.

Interview 01

I have worked successfully in xx for over 6 years. One of my first xx jobs was in my an internship at xx company. Until now, Currently, I have been working for xx company for over 6 years.I have good outsight, mabye that's exactly the reason and I easy it is easy for me to find the guest guests what they need. I like to help them and solve their problems.

I'm not sure what you mean by "outsight."

Missing my dogs

I miss my dogs, the two of them died two months ago. I just can't believe they're gone now. I miss them very much.

This is written very well; I'm sorry for your loss.

The syndrome of a woman in the field from

I have known about this syndrome for many years. But i never confronted it. However here in the italki notebook it has is everywhere. Every notebook entry written by man took has less views than notebook entries written by a woman. I am already thinking of changing the my name and avatar to women "woman" so that would might receive so as much attention.

CLASSWORK: write an email to teacher Introducing yourself and explaining your expectations

Hello Pilar,
how are you? I am writing to you to introduce myself. My name is Luis and I live in London with my family. I'm a civil servant and I work in a medical library in a hospital. Basically, we give documentary support mainly to doctors and nurses through medical publications and databases. My hobbies are reading, travelling, listening to music and trying to cook something. I really enjoy enjoying food, especially Italian food, which forces me to play sports to stay in good shape. Nowadays, I play tennis and paddle, but I'm not good at any either of them. Learning a language with English is one of my main priorities because it can help me professionally and I think it is important to be able to communicate when you travel or interact with people from other cultures, that's why I try to improve my knowledge of English. Personally, I would like to concentrate on speaking and listening, skills where it's hardest to get a good improving improve. which I think are the key to reaching a good level.

This is very well written. The only phrase I would recommend changing is the last one. Maybe that sentence could be rewritten into two sentences, or it could be written like: "I would like to concentrate on speaking and listening, skills that are hard to improve and which I think are key to reaching a good level."