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Could you please correct this email? Dear Investors,

I am a new finance manager for Koshin.inc, Carlos Anderson. This is to inform our investors that we are going to hold a meeting to give a information about our new year strategies. As a new manager, I am very pleased to meet you.

The meeting will be held in the Koshin convention center on December 21, and the meeting time will begin at 2 PM. The meeting will divide into three section, first is the brief introduction of myself, second is retrospect to this year, third is our new strategy about next year and the further future. The whole section will not be over two hours, and there is a break time about 15 minutes after the second section. And there will be a snack and beverages prepared for you.

For this meeting, we need to know the exact number attending. So please let me know whether you attend or not. We really appreciate your support for our company, I hope to see you soon.

Best regard,

Carlos Anderson

Finance manager

Koshin.inc

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Could you please correct this email?

Dear Investors,

I am Carlos Anderson, a new finance manager for Koshin, Inc. This is to inform our investors that we are going to hold a meeting to give a release information about our new year strategies for the new year. As a new manager, I am very pleased to meet you.

The meeting will be held in the Koshin convention center on December 21, and the meeting time will begin at 2 PM. The meeting will be divided into three sections. First, I will briefly introduce is the brief introduction of myself, second, I will review is retrospect to this year, third is and finally, we will discuss our new strategy about for next year and the further future beyond. The whole section meeting will not be over last more than two hours, and there is will be a 15-minute break time about 15 minutes after the second section. And there will be a snack and beverages will be prepared for you.

For this meeting, we need to know the exact number attending. So please let me know whether you plan to attend or not. We really appreciate your support for our company. I hope to see you soon.

Best regards,

Carlos Anderson

Finance manager

Koshin.inc

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