proposal
The purpose of this proposal is to make recommendations aimed at rebuild
ing the town after a
major * earthquake,
which almos
t destroyed our beautiful town.
The strong earthquake hit our town two weeks ago and has left important buildings seriously damaged,
like including the primary school, the clinic center and the church, and others in the verge of collapse.
In some sections of the roads, enorm
ous cracks
has have shown up, making
the traffic
cars /
car travel impossible.
After a meeting held in the city council, we want to suggest some recommendations to rebuild the damage areas.
Recommendations:
First of all, we might undertake
reconstruction of the main buildings
reconstruction in order to recover our routine as son as po
ssible. Our
priority it's priorities are the school and clinic,
so as to
not minimize the impact on children's instruction, and, on the other hand, to
take care
for the sick
s and wounded
inunder the
better best possible conditions.
Likewise, we need to cover and repair the
deep cracks which ha
ve ap
peared in some roads to restore
the normal traffic.
Having taking everything into considera
ction, I strongly appreciate that all
the above suggestions
above, could involve
a considerable expenditures, but I feel that the cost would be worth it in the long term.
*You can use the word "unfortunate" here instead of "strong". However, "unfortunately" is normally used at the beginning of a sentence, or sometimes in the middle of the sentence between commas. For example: "A strong earthquake hit our town last week, which, unfortunately, destroyed many people's homes."
This is a wonderful piece of writing. The changes I have made are minimal, and mostly involve "set phrases" that we tend to use in American journalistic writing. Great job!