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The purpose of this proposal is to make recommendations aimed at rebuild the town after the unfortunately earthquake which almos destroyed our beautiful town.
The strong earthquake hit our town two weeks ago and has left important buildings seriously damaged like the primary school, the clinic center and the church, and others in the verge of collapse.
In some sections of the roads, enormes cracks has show up, making the traffic cars impossible.
After a meeting held in the city council, we want to suggest some recommendations to rebuild the damage areas.
Recommendations:
First of all, we might undertake the main buildings reconstruction in order to recover our routine as son as posible. Our priority it's the school and clinic, to not delay childern teaching, and, on the other hand, to take care sicks and wounded in the better conditions.
Likewise, we need to cover and repair the Deep cracks which has apeeared in some roads to restore the normal traffic.
Having taking everything into consideraction, I strongly appreciate that all suggestions above, could involve a considerable expenditure, but I feel that the cost would be worth it in the long term.
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proposal
The purpose of this proposal is to make recommendations aimed at rebuilding the town after a major * earthquake, which almost destroyed our beautiful town.The strong earthquake hit our town two weeks ago and has left important buildings seriously damaged, like including the primary school, the clinic center and the church, and others in the verge of collapse.
In some sections of the roads, enormous cracks has have shown up, making the traffic cars /car travel impossible.
After a meeting held in the city council, we want to suggest some recommendations to rebuild the damage areas.
Recommendations:
First of all, we might undertake reconstruction of the main buildings reconstruction in order to recover our routine as son as possible. Our priority it's priorities are the school and clinic, so as to not minimize the impact on children's instruction, and, on the other hand, to take care for the sicks and wounded inunder the better best possible conditions.
Likewise, we need to cover and repair the deep cracks which have appeared in some roads to restore the normal traffic.
Having taking everything into consideraction, I strongly appreciate that all the above suggestions above, could involve a considerable expenditures, but I feel that the cost would be worth it in the long term.
*You can use the word "unfortunate" here instead of "strong". However, "unfortunately" is normally used at the beginning of a sentence, or sometimes in the middle of the sentence between commas. For example: "A strong earthquake hit our town last week, which, unfortunately, destroyed many people's homes."
This is a wonderful piece of writing. The changes I have made are minimal, and mostly involve "set phrases" that we tend to use in American journalistic writing. Great job!
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proposal
The purpose of this proposal is to make recommendations for rebuilding of after a major earthquake almost destroyed our beautiful town.A strong earthquake hit our town two weeks ago and has left many important buildings seriously damaged, including the primary school, the clinic and the church, among others, which are on the verge of collapse.
Enormous cracks have appeared in some sections of the road, making it impossible for vehicles to reach many parts of the town.
After a meeting held by the city council, we would like to suggest some recommendations to rebuild the damaged areas.
Recommendations:
First of all, we should immediately begin the reconstruction of the previously mentioned buildings in order to return to our normal way of life as soon as posible. Our priorities should be the school and the clinic, so as not to interfere with the education of our children, and to provide the sick and the wounded with the treatment and care that they need.
Likewise, we need to repair the roads as soon as possible to allow access to the town as well as the return of normal transportation.
Having taking everything into consideraction, I truly appreciate that all the suggestions above would involve a considerable expenditure, but I feel that the cost would be worth it in the long term.
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