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- I don't think "Although the movie was long, yet it was interesting." is wrong, but it doesn't flow very naturally (In American English) "Although the movie was long, it was interesting." Feels a bit more natural to say instead. It still works with the options you give for your question! "Although" is the only option from the list of options you give that still reads naturally with the change I suggested0 votedAugust 8, 20240
- こんにちわ 世（よ）！ 今日は四月二十三日です。日本語わかりません。 がんばります！今日、私はがっこうにいきました. 駐車場（ちゅうしゃじょお）にアートがあります。すずし！ 私はかなりポットがほしかったです。.かなりポットがありません。:( 私の竹（たけ）はちいさいです。私はそれをうえるしたいです。すみません、私は日本語わかりません. This is what I tried to say in Japanese. Hello World! Today is April 23rd. I don't know Japanese. I'll try my best! Today, I went to school. There was art in the parking lot. It was cool! I wanted a pretty pot. There was not a pretty pot. :(. My bamboo plant is small. I want to re-plant it. Sorry, I know know Japanese. What should my next entry be about? Let me know in the comments. ^.^April 24, 201530
The cherry-blossom front came!
"Cherry Blossom Front" is a line graph illustrating the forecasted blooming dates of cherry blossoms in various locations of Japan. In Every March, the Japan Meteorological Agency announces the timetable. and The areas where the blossoms will bloom on the same date are connected making lines.
I live in a rather northern city of Japan, named Sapporo. So, every year the blooming date is relatively late. And The day finally came yesterday! I got out of my house in haste when I heard the news that the cherry-blossom front came to Sapporo. But now if i think about it, I didn't have to be in a hurry! I love flowers, especially one of my favorite flowers which is the cherry blossom, so I wanted to see it soon. I can't believe that there were was a lot of snow. and It was very cold here just the other day but some how the cherry blossom season came already. Time is really going fast.
Many people stopped right in front of a cherry blossom tree and looked at the beauty for a while. And Then, they took a picture of the tree while feeling the warmth in of a nice spring day. When I noticed that they were taking pictures with the Smartphone, I thought again that time is really going fast. I do want to stay young forever! Hehe :P
I will show you a picture I took yesterday! Cherry blossoms are beautiful, aren't they?
Thank you for reading this to the end. Would you be willing to correct my writing? :)
Hello!! I love cherry blossoms myself. I always wanted to see what they looked like in person. This entry is very well done. I've taken out words by crossing them out and I highlighted the words I've added. Hopefully it is helpful!0 votedApril 24, 20152A letter to my friend.
Please correct me my writing if I'm wrong.
Dear Mike,
I am on vacation in Acapulco, the weather is hotter than San Francisco and very nice. I like it here but miss my home and my parents. My hotel is very luxurious and has the latest technology.
The people here are very friendly and nice. I also met a very attractive woman that I love. I think so that she is very gorgeus and beautiful.
And The food here is great. I ate crabs, lobster and a lemon flavoured ice cream dessert.
For now that's all I have to tell you.
See you soon.
P.S. Feed my dog.0 votedApril 24, 20150
