I hope that the things can change my friend

I just noticed it posts comments in a weird format so i corrected it differently. I hope that's okay >.< Hopefully I was helpful!

I hope it is okay for me to correct you notebook entry. You have done very well. I put little star signs * around the pieces I have changed. Feel free to message me if you like ^o^. Also, I get what you mean. Sometimes my mom can be that way too. Hopefully I was helpful ^.^ With the stars: Sometimes I want to go out to *hang out* with my friends *, but* my mother always *urges* me to stay at home *and do* my homework. When I *tell* her *that* my homework *is* finished, she will force me to read some books. I really desire having more freedom. However, my parents always compel me to study hard. Here it is without the stars: Sometimes I want to go out to hang out with my friends, but my mother always urges me to stay at home and do my homework. When I tell her that my homework is finished, she will force me to read some books. I really desire having more freedom. However, my parents always compel me to study hard.