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    Writing - My new room

    Hello Tom,
    Thank you for your letter. It was nice to hear from you.
    Well, I made a lot of changes.
    First, I changed my old bed because I bought a new bed that is bigger than the last one. It’s very comfortable, I sleep like a child.
    Secondly, I painted my room in blue because it is my favourite colour.
    In addition, I bought a new chair for studying because I need it.
    In conclusion my room is a beautiful place now. I love it.
    Please write me back soon
    Regards,
    JuanFran.


    Your letter is very easy to understand, some of the grammar is just a little bit strange. "In addition" is correct, but feels a little stiff. "Also" would be a good word to use. "In conclusion" is correct too, but you don't need it. "My room is a beautiful place now." sounds more natural.

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    February 16, 2016
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    意外なプレゼント お久しぶり! 先週末ゲームセンターへUFOキャッチャーを使いにいきました。UFOキャッチャーがとても好きです!いつも楽しいから、上手になりたいんです。でも。。。先週末わたしはとても下手でした。しょうがないね。すべて金がかかったときは後、知らない人を見ました。かれも私を見ました。彼は外に出ていまして、突然止まりました。なにかと言った。ヘッドホンを着たから、彼の声が聞こえませんでした。彼は突如私にプライズをあげて、外に出た!びっくりした!そして本当にうれしいでした。プライズはリラックマのブランケットでした。かわいいね~ 不思議な人、ありがとうございます! Long time no see! Last weekend, I went and played crane games at a game center. I really like crane games! Because they're so fun, I want to get really good at them. But last weekend, I was doing really poorly. Oh well, it happens. After I spent all my money, I saw someone I didn't know. He also looked at me. He was on his way out, but stopped suddenly. He said something. I couldn't hear him though because I was wearing headphones. Suddenly, he gave me his prize and left! I was shocked! Also very happy. The prize was a Rilakkuma blanket. It's cute~ Mysterious person, thank you!
    February 16, 2016
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    猫を見つけた! やった!最近二匹子猫ちゃんを飼いました。子猫たちは生後6週間ぐらいです。名前はかず(オス)とみこ(メス)です。兄弟だからもう仲良くなります。いつも一緒に遊んだり、食べたり、寝たりする。すごく可愛い! みんなさんもぺっとを飼っていますか?どんなペットいますか? We found cats! Hooray! Recently, we adopted two kittens. The kittens are about six weeks old. Their names are Kazu (for the boy) and Miko (for the girl). Since they're siblings, they already get along well. They always play together, eat together, sleep together, etc. They're so cute! Do you have pets too? What kind?
    May 8, 2015
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    The Mother's Day

    Taiwanese "Mother's Day"5/10 (Sunday) is coming soon. What kind of present will everyone will give their mom? (Or, "What kind of present will you give your mom?")

    By the way, the color of "Carnation" is red except and does everybody know other colors?


    台灣的"母親節"5/10(星期日)即將來臨.大家會送母親什麼樣的禮物呢?

    順帶一提,"康乃馨"的顏色除了紅色之外,其他的顏色大家知道嗎?

     

    I will probably call my mother-in-law in America. :)

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    May 8, 2015
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    Third engagement anniversary!

    Hi again. This is my second notebook entry and I hope to be good enough text by text.
    Yesterday was our third engagement anniversary and I planned to make this day as unique as possible. (You could say, "I wanted to make this day...") So we went to a concert of for a singer named "Shahram Shokohi" in Milad Tower. He was successful signer in combining traditional music with modern Pop music in Iran. (You could say, "He is a successful singer who combines traditional music with modern Pop music in Iran.")

    It was quite fun and it's absolutely worth going to especially with those VIP tickets!!
    After the concert, me and my fiance, decided to go to some restaurant that we never tried before so "Tahdig" restaurant could be a good option. We arrived there about 10:30 PM and we ordered some special food called "Plus Plus". It was a nice combination of 6 types of "Kebab". It was good but not great.
    After the restaurant we needed a long night walk for talking and planning for our future.
    I think it was a memorable night and I'm happy with it.

    Thanks
    Matin

     

    How romantic! That sounds like it was a nice night.

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    May 8, 2015
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    ペットを飼いましょう~ あたしと夫は猫がほしいんです。夫はとくに子猫がとてもほしいです。ちょっと大変ですけど。ペットを飼う所はあまり分かりません。ペットショップはぜったいだめです。アメリカに動物のシェルターがいっぱいのでペットを見つけるのは易い。でも日本にシェルターを探すのが難しいみたいです。だから昨日はインタネットで猫を探しました。もしかしたら子猫を見つけました。楽しみ~~ Let's adopt a pet~ My husband and I want to adopt a cat. My husband especially wants to adopt a kitten. It's kind of hard though. We don't really know where to go to adopt a pet. Pet shops are definitely a no-go. In America, there are many animal shelters so it's easy to find a pet. But in Japan, it seems hard to find a shelter. So yesterday we looked for a cat on the internet. We might have found a kitten. Exciting~~
    April 20, 2015
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    Monday April 19

    Today I´m here to can practice my english, I hope I can learn more.

     

    I wish you luck! :)

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    April 20, 2015
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    April 20, 2015
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    about my two last weekends

    In the (Over or During is better) easter weekend I went to my sister´s house, which is about 200 kilometers from my hometown. Her fathers-in-law (She has two father-in-laws?) are fighting tooth and nail for their lives, they are hanging on by their fingernails for their lives, and she doesn´t have time to come to my house, because she has to help taking take care with of them. She has a daughter who, besides been being my niece is also my goddaughter. So, we had a good time there, had a catchup, drunk some beers, and ate a nice food. In the Last weekend I went to attend a course to learn how to use my time properly. I was in the place I like to go to practice meditation, with a lot of mountains, valleys, native forest, without tv, internet, cell phone and beverage. The food is vegetarian, organic and produced in the locally. It was a time to recharge my mind, my soul and reconect with my essence. So, I took advantages of those trips to develop a conversation, using some idioms, phrasal verbs and brush up my pronouciation, to improve my English. I invited my teacher, Taylor, to visit the site: www.brahmakumaris.org - It is not about religion, they take part of UNITED NATIONS for the peace, and they say and I believe we can control our mind avoiding a lot of sickness, such as stress, depression, anxiety, among others. We started to talk about my whole life, but I lost power, we had a blackout. Next time I would like to keep talking on this subject to learn a lot of new words, to use the verbs in the past tense and to talk about how fast the time is running, how fast the world is changing. I´m gonna try to schedule my class on saturday or another time on sunday, because I´m gonna travel on a business trip next sunday afternoon.

     

    Sounds like a relaxing weekend!

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    April 20, 2015
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    Your entry is very good! The one thing I would change is this:

    "Well, since I was a child I used to listen to songs in English."

     

    "Well, ever since I was a child I have listened to songs in English."

    This means you still listen to English songs today.

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    April 20, 2015
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