I want to learn english

Hello, people and thank you for this opportunity.

I want to learn english, my principal interest is to speak english very well and to understand the language.
I am a lawyer and I am a microbiologist. 
Thank you in advance.

good bye

Second (chance)

Everyone deserves a second chance, especially when the person is repenting his actions and showing changes in their behaviour.

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Diary 416

vocabulary has  always been a big problem for me. I often don't know how to express myself clearly because of my limited words.

Last night, I could not sleep. Because I was thinking about the difference between learning a foreign language and practicing a native language. Why is it so difficult for people to master one language?

It is summer in China. I've gained a lot of weight in during the winter. It's time to  go on start a diet.

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Good luck, Jane!

please... help me, It is for my class.

It was a cold and dark October night. James and Sarah were walking nervously in the countryside when suddenly a big bear went out of a tree. They were face to face with the big animal, but they could not run. Their legs were trembling because of the fear. When Sarah got out of the shock, she grabbed James' hand They started running in the dark night, Their faces were white as a paper.They were sitting under a tree when James said: "Thanks Sarah" , and Sarah answered with a smile and then she said: " James, you are the most important thing in my life". They touched their hands, but the fear was greater grew with the minutes and the hours. The sounds in the night were stronger louder, these sounds came from many animals that were very dangerous.

Their bodies were trembling with fear and the night has did not end. They didn't know that the bear was still there, when suddenly the bear bit James' hand. James was in great danger because he had lost a lot of blood. The bear disappeared because he heard a shot. Sarah took off her jacket and put it on James' hand to decrease the hemorragea.

The next morning,very early , they were found by a rescue group, who had to carry James and Sarah to the hospital.
Doctor said to James that his hand will loose the mobility. James took a few months to recover emotionally and succeded with the help of Sarah.

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¡Lo has hehco muy bien! Te recomiendo que practiques el tiempo pasado y el futuro de los verbos, especialmente de aquellos que son irregulares como "take". Al igual, añadí algunos puntos y comas donde deberían ir para que mejorar un poco la redacción. ¡Mucha suerte! Si algún día tienes una duda, no dudes en mandarme un mensaje.

Saludos

Español: Un idioma bonito, ¡pero es muy díficil para mi!

Esta es mi primera tiempo  vez en el cuaderno! Yo sé que tengo muchos errores, pero estoy bien con los errores. El Español es un idioma bonito. ¡Pero aprender es muy difícil! Por ejemplo: en inglés, hay "The". The dog, the boy, the girls y muchas cosas más. En español, hay el, la, los y las...¡el niño, las niñas y los perros! Cuatro palabras por una palabra en inglés...¡Ay Dios mio! Haha. Pero esta bien. Es un proceso y quiero aprender el idioma!

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You've done it very well! remember that in spaniss when we add an exclamation mark (!) we need to add this other exclamation mark (¡) at the beggining of the sentences.

I also added some "tildes" which look like this (ó á é í etc) (people also call them "acentos" ) maybe you haven't learn this yet, but they are used according to some rules.

Keep working hard! If you ever have a question or would like me to explain you anything I would be very happy to help, do not hesitate on sending a message!! good luck!