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My idol
I like Neymar a lot.
I first found out about him when he played in the 2014 World Cup. I think he is very handsome and excellent. He is now playing for Barca. On February 3rd, I wrote a letter to him in English to tell him that I'm his loyal fan and I will support him forever. I know there were a lot of grammar mistakes in the letter but I still hope he understood it. Time went by and on March 31, I received a letter from Spain. He sent an autograph card to me! I was so excited.
Do you like football? Have you ever heard about Neymar?Don't forget to add spaces after using punctuation (example: , and .). I changed some things for you that were strange sounding. When speaking about something that happened in the past, don't forget to use past tense words. Great job! It must have been very exciting!
0 votedApril 17, 20150My English learning
Hi! My name is FanYingjie. I'm 16 years old. I am from China. I study English not only for exams but also for better communication. Although I have studied English since I was 9 years old, my English is not good. The last exam I got 102 (the full mark is 150). I found that English grammar is my weak spot, so I decided to study grammar exclusively. I hope I will progress.
Don't forget to add your spaces between words when writing sentences. I marked words in red that were incorrect or strange sounding. Other than that, great job! I am still able to understand your English! (:
0 votedApril 17, 20152
