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My idol
I like Neymar a lot.
I first found out about him when he played in the 2014 World Cup. I think he is very handsome and excellent. He is now playing for Barca. On February 3rd, I wrote a letter to him in English to tell him that I'm his loyal fan and I will support him forever. I know there were a lot of grammar mistakes in the letter but I still hope he understood it. Time went by and on March 31, I received a letter from Spain. He sent an autograph card to me! I was so excited.
Do you like football? Have you ever heard about Neymar?
Don't forget to add spaces after using punctuation (example: , and .). I changed some things for you that were strange sounding. When speaking about something that happened in the past, don't forget to use past tense words. Great job! It must have been very exciting!
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