My English learning

Hi! My name is FanYingjie. I'm 16 years old. I am from China. I study English not only for exams but also for better communication. Although I have studied English since I was 9 years old, my English is not good. The last exam I got 102 (the full mark is 150). I found that English grammar is my weak spot, so I decided to study grammar exclusively. I hope I will progress.

Don't forget to add your spaces between words when writing sentences. I marked words in red that were incorrect or strange sounding. Other than that, great job! I am still able to understand your English! (:

My English learning

Hi! My name is Fan Yingjie. I'm 16 years old and from China. I study English not only for exams but also to better communicate.  Despite having studied English since I was 9 years old, my English is not good. I scored 102 on my last exam (A perfect score is 150). I find that English grammar is my weakest area, so I have decided to study grammar (exclusively). I hope I will make a lot of progress.

My English learning

Hi!My name is FanYingjie.I'm16 years old.I am from China.I study English not only for exam but also for better communication.Though I have studied English since I was 9 years old,my English is not good.The last exam I got 102(the full mark is 150).I found that English garmmar is my week spot,so I decided to study grammar entirely.I hope I will progress.

everything was correct except for the get 102. It should be past tense so you use got.Other than that great job