My favorite singers

Hi everybody!
I really love listening to music so much.
So, I'm going to tell talk about you my favorite singers and make some recommendations recommend you.

I usually confirm check the UK top 40 chart.
It's The ranking often changed ranking changes more than the Billboard chart so there are it's a lot of fun to see how it fluctuates of fluctuation.

At the moment, I enjoy listening to: I'm enjoying listening to this.
'Jessie glynne - Hold my hand'
When I'm riding my bike, listening to this song, I feel get so high!
This song boosts the bike. (?)

About my favorite singers, I like Rihanna is one of my favourite singers. 
I'm expecting her new volume of 7.  I'm expecting her 7th album. (I'm excited about her upcoming 7th album)
I love the most song of her is Out of her songs, 'We found love' is my favourite.

Besides, I also like Kanye.
I think he is a genious but I don't like his personality (?) mind his privacy!
Anyway, one of his song, the MV for 'Runaway' MV is awesome!
I love it so much, I've wacthed it many several times.

Also, I also like Pitbull, Taylor swift, David guetta, fun, Ariana grande, Maroon 5, etc..
Did you know Maroon 5 is famous in korea?
When they publish release their new song, it always ranks it's ranked high on Korean music charts!
Even now, their song 'Sugar' is ranked in our charts.

I'm about to recommend you to Korean song. I'd like to recommend a Korean song:
'긱스 - Is you (feat. 박정현)'
https://youtu.be/agapLTjPpQQ
Here's the link.
I want you to listen to it!
I think you will must love it ;)

Thanks for reading, and could you do me a favor?
Please Correct me please.
Goodbye^^~

I made it sound more natural, but overall its really easy to understand! Well done! :)

Do you still look at the night sky still?

When I leave my work, it's around 7~8 pm and then, I can see the stars in the night sky.
Just by seeing the night sky, I can gain energy, hope, and placidity (serenity).
But I can barely see it barely because it's I'm too busy so I can't forget to remind myself to look up at it to see it.
I order make myself to work hard, study hard, satisfy everybody, and then I'm I get getting exhausted.
I thought I don't have leisure.  I don't have any hobbies
Actually I work everyday, even on the weekends.
Always I'm always tired so I oversleep, and then run (rush) to be not be late.
By now, I realize it was a clumsy excuse.
I had time to see the night sky but I just didn't notice it.
I can make the extra more time.
I won't rush be hasty, and then I'm going to I can enjoy feel all through spring, see the flowers blooming, and have presence peace of mind.
Tonight, I'll see the night sky.

Hey, I really like your attitude towards learning enlgish, if you want to have a chat don't hesistate to meassage me :)

Red is corrections, blue is optional to make it sound more natural :)

Do Is it correct to accept immigrants in Japan? 　日本で移民を受け入れるのは正しい？

Recently, Japan is reconsidering thinks the immigration policy in Congress. Do Is it correct to accept immigrants in Japan?
I want to know hear about a variety of lots of different ideas. Please write everyone's idea thoughts from around the world of the world to comment.


最近、日本は議会で移民政策が考えられています。日本で移民を受け入れるのは正しいのか？様々な考えを知りたい。世界のみんなのアイディアをコメントに書いてください。

I just made it sound a bit natural, I'm not entirely sure if it is 100% grammatically correct :)

It's been raining since yesterday.

Hi there!
In Korea, it's been raining since yesterday.
It's the spring rain.
Yes, it makes blossoms to flowers bloom!
I like flowers, I'll be able to see them soon it a little later.
I'm so expecting excited see the for spring!
The winter maintained  was so long but the spring is finally coming. (It has been a long winter but spring is finally coming)
I like the spring of course, but I dont like the rain to be raining because I can't ride my bike when it's raining.
I'd love to ride on a well shaded street soon!

Blue is just more natural sounding, and red is for minor corrections :) Well done! :)

French

Recently I enjoyed a Korean TV program called "Where is my friend's home?", where some men from different countries pay a visit one's home. This time, the This destination was Belgium.
Some European languages seemed so looked so similar to each other that I didn't have a particular preference for French before I watched the program. Since the south Belgians speaks French, I could watch the cast and learn French it. Although the Belgians' French would be as good as a dialect for the French, the words sounded beautiful or funny or even cute for me.
I'm still not fluent in english much of an English speaker, so I want to learn more than basic words some day.

Hi there! The blue part is a little bit difficult to understand, but other than that, I think you did really well! :) I may have interpreted the last sentence incorrectly? I think you already know more than just basic words :) 

Tonsure

In the past, former days, I had medium length hair.
I could perm it, or dye it, or do whatever I wanted with on my hair, but now I can't.
I have no hair to do.
As time goes on, my hair will grow keep growing but I can't wait to do.
I didn't intend to get a tonsure. Never!
But a the hairdresser misundetstood me my intention so I ended up with a had to tonsure.
I wish to grow my hair grew faster.
But my very short hair has an advantage.
I don't have to wash my hair everyday(lol, is it this dirty?),
and I don't have to comb or dry mine.
Well, it doesn't console make myself feel better.

I'm sorry that you lost all your hair! If its any consolidation, I think you look great! :)