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My favorite singers Hi everybody! I love listening to music so much. So, I'm going to tell you my favorite singers and recommend you. I usually confirm the UK top 40 chart. It's often changed ranking than Billboard chart so there are a lot of fun to see of fluctuation. At the moment, I'm enjoying listening to this. 'Jessie glynne - Hold my hand' When I'm riding my bike, listening this song, I feel so high! This song boosts the bike. About my favorite singers, I like Rihanna. I'm expecting her new volume of 7. I love the most song of her is 'We found love' Besides, I like Kanye. I think he is a genious but I mind his privacy! Anyway, one of his song, 'Runaway' MV is awesome! I love it so much, I've wacthed it many times. Also, I like Pitbull, Taylor swift, David guetta, fun, Ariana grande, Maroon 5, etc.. Did you know Maroon 5 is famous in korea? When they publish their new song, always it's ranked high on Korean music chart! Even now, their song 'Sugar' is ranked in our chart. I'm about to recommend you to Korean song. '긱스 - Is you (feat. 박정현)' https://youtu.be/agapLTjPpQQ Here's link. I want you to listen to it! I think you must love it ;) Thanks for reading, and could you do me a favor? Correct me please. Goodbye^^~

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My favorite singers

Hi everybody!
I really love listening to music so much.
So, I'm going to tell talk about you my favorite singers and make some recommendations recommend you.

I usually confirm check the UK top 40 chart.
It's The ranking often changed ranking changes more than the Billboard chart so there are it's a lot of fun to see how it fluctuates of fluctuation.

At the moment, I enjoy listening to: I'm enjoying listening to this.
'Jessie glynne - Hold my hand'
When I'm riding my bike, listening to this song, I feel get so high!
This song boosts the bike. (?)

About my favorite singers, I like Rihanna is one of my favourite singers. 
I'm expecting her new volume of 7.  I'm expecting her 7th album. (I'm excited about her upcoming 7th album)
I love the most song of her is Out of her songs, 'We found love' is my favourite.

Besides, I also like Kanye.
I think he is a genious but I don't like his personality (?) mind his privacy!
Anyway, one of his song, the MV for 'Runaway' MV is awesome!
I love it so much, I've wacthed it many several times.

Also, I also like Pitbull, Taylor swift, David guetta, fun, Ariana grande, Maroon 5, etc..
Did you know Maroon 5 is famous in korea?
When they publish release their new song, it always ranks it's ranked high on Korean music charts!
Even now, their song 'Sugar' is ranked in our charts.

I'm about to recommend you to Korean song. I'd like to recommend a Korean song:
'긱스 - Is you (feat. 박정현)'
https://youtu.be/agapLTjPpQQ
Here's the link.
I want you to listen to it!
I think you will must love it ;)

Thanks for reading, and could you do me a favor?
Please Correct me please.
Goodbye^^~

 

I made it sound more natural, but overall its really easy to understand! Well done! :)

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