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Do you look at the night sky still? When I leave my work, it's 7~8 pm and then, I can see the stars in the night sky. Just seeing the night sky, I can gain energy, hope, placidity. But I can see it barely because it's too busy so I can't remind myself to see it. I order myself to work hard, study hard, satisfy everybody, and then I'm getting exhausted. I thought I don't have leisure. Actually I work everyday even on the weekend. Always I'm tired so I oversleep, and then run to be not late. By now, I realize it was a clumsy excuse. I had time to see the night sky but I just didn't notice it. I can make the extra time. I won't be hasty, and then I'm going to feel all through spring, see the flowers blooming, have presence of mind. Tonight, I'll see the night sky.

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Do you still look at the night sky still?

When I leave my work, it's around 7~8 pm and then, I can see the stars in the night sky.
Just by seeing the night sky, I can gain energy, hope, and placidity (serenity).
But I can barely see it barely because it's I'm too busy so I can't forget to remind myself to look up at it to see it.
I order make myself to work hard, study hard, satisfy everybody, and then I'm I get getting exhausted.
I thought I don't have leisure.  I don't have any hobbies
Actually I work everyday, even on the weekends.
Always I'm always tired so I oversleep, and then run (rush) to be not be late.
By now, I realize it was a clumsy excuse.
I had time to see the night sky but I just didn't notice it.
I can make the extra more time.
I won't rush be hasty, and then I'm going to I can enjoy feel all through spring, see the flowers blooming, and have presence peace of mind.
Tonight, I'll see the night sky.

 

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