Thank you for all of the comments it is highly appreciated. I think I may have come accross a little bad and perhaps should have worded that a little better, I do not think ALL Chinese shows are cheesey just the ones that I have watched seem to have that tendancy. 

I do love a lot of Chinese and Hong Kong films though and studied Asian Cinema at times during my film lectures at univiersity. 

@ Alan thanks for the comment - I am aware of Chinese films and have watched a lot, my favourite Chinese director is probably Jia Zhangke with films such as 'Still life' and 'A touch of sin'. The Hong Kong director Wong Kar Wai is my favourite though but their is not much Mandarin in his films, mainly Cantonese. 

Once again many thanks everyone for the help and I will be checking some of these out. 

My friend

Sandro has been my friend for almost ten years now. I first met him at a (here use a because the reader doesnt know which concern it is. You use 'the' when the reader knows. If you mention it again in hte text you can use 'the' because we have already been introduced to it and know which conert) concert of one of my favorite guitar players. After the gig, we found ourselves at the same table in the club and our common friends then introduced me to him. He was friendly and sociable; we started to talk about music and realised that our tastes were the same.

Physically, Sandro looks younger than most other man in their forties. It’s not only because he does sports and has a muscular build, but his dress/fashion style is also modern and informal. His hairstyle is something similar to the mohawk. He prefers wearing casual clothes, and for concerts he always wears a pair of ripped jeans and a t-shirt with a cool inscription. I don’t think I’ve ever seen him in a classic suit.
As for his personality, Sandro’s most striking characteristic is his sense of humour, he travels a lot with his band and when we met for a cup of coffee he spoke/talked (past tense) about his adventures for ages . He’s very good-natured and if you need help he’s always here.

Sandro is not very patient and is easily annoyed when somebody doesn’t keep their promises. To tell you the truth, Sandro himself tends to be quite absent-minded; forgetting about birthdays and arranged meetings. I know he doesn’t want to offend anybody: it happens only because he’s always busy doing something. He spends a lot of time working and often stays in his studio recording new tunes till midnight.

All in all, he’s a good friend. Since the day we met we have grown very close and I’m very fond of him, even if he forgets about my birthday again. 

Very good! Keep up the good work. I hope my corrections help :)

Do you want to learn Chinese?

Some people say Chinese is difficult to learn, but I think it is very easy haha. This is because I am Chinese. In fact, all languages are dificult to language learners when learning a new language. I have been studying English for many years, but I still don't speak English that much, except in English class.

I can hardly speak English. I always just say"hi" "oh my god""sorry""thank you""what"and so on in life. All right the topic runs, if you want to learn Chinese you can contact me. I can teach you some dialects. It is very interesting. Have you ever heard the Chinese version of Let It Go?

You need to pracitce grammar :) Mainly in how you write sentences and your use of . (full stops) and , (commas). I can help your learn if you want to be language partners and help with my Mandarin :)