Visiting remote natural environment

It is possible for scientists and tourists to travel to remote natural environments, such as the South Pole. Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
My essay:

As the development of technology continues, people can now can go to some isolated natural areas. While this trend is becoming more interesting and beneficial for most people, I think its drawbacks also remained considerable.

On the one hand, visiting remote natural places has some benefits. Firstly, it brings us excitement and joy. Since going to most famous cities or countries has been too common and easy ["and accessible"?] for most people, it might drives [or "stimulate"] their curiosity if they can explore new places such as the South Pole or the Sahara desert. By the In this way, they can also get some valuable experience and unforgettable memories. Secondly, some people, especially scientists, can expand their knowledge about natural habitats through this way of travelling. For instance, if they go to the Amazon rainforest, they might discover new plants or creatures that have never been found before.

On the other hand, I believe undertaking expeditions to the wilderness has far more downsides. The first one is that it can be risky if the travellers are not sufficiently prepared. They might get a cold if the temperature goes down immediately, or suffer from illness if their healthy is not good enough. Moreover, travelling to forests can be very dangerous as people might be attacked by wild animals or canivourous plants. Also, visiting isolated places often requires a lot of efforts to investigate and research so that the safety of travellers can be ensured, so the costs of travelling tend to be very high. Therefore, It is likely to benefit only a small groups of individuals such as rich people or scientists.

In conclusion, I believe the disadvantages of people being able to go to remote areas outweigh its advantages.

The Stranger. Part 2. Chapter 9. Damien's vanishing. Please, correct my mistakes.

They went on going to the Druid's Town. Damien was walking behind of Lisa.
"When we'll come get to them?, you'll understand more things. Just try to listen carefully." There wasn't any answer., Sso Lisa looked back, but she didn't look see him.
"Damien! What i's the joke? Where are you?"
Damien found himself in a cave, but still heard Lisa.
"Welcome!" Said an unknown voice.
"Piss off!" Damien answered.
"Your way is not right. Join our army and forget about the weak Druids." Suddenly he the speaker appeared and Damien could see this disgusting creature. It was a goblin.
"If I had the face like yours I would join your f..ing army" Damien clearly scoffed.
"Damien, I hear you. I know where you got to. Don't agree with whatever he suggest" Lisa said.
"I know. Can you pull out me from of here?" Damien roesponded.
"It's not the a hard task [or just "sure"]. Just wait a minute." Lisa said.

About the movie "Room"

Today is August 31st. I would like to practice my English writing skills. I watched a Canadian-Irish movie yesterday, called “Room”. I will reveal some details of the movie below, so don’t read it if you want to watch it.
It is the story of a woman who was kidnapped and enclosed in a “room” seven years before the beginning of the plot (or just "seven years earlier"). By this time, she hads a child, who is 5 years old and enclosed with her in the shelter.
As her child is 5, she thinks he is big enough to understand there is a life outside of the walls and she decides to escape with him. She teaches him to fake death (or "feign death" or "play dead"), so that the kidnapper (who also is his father) will take him outside of the room to buriedy him. She explains to her child that he will have to jump from the truck and he has to give a note that she has written to anyone he will see sees in the street. The scene in the truck is very frightening. Fortunately, the plan succeeds and the police also foundind the woman thanks to the explanation of the boy's explanation.
The next part of the movie describes how they acclimate themselves to the world after all thisese years captured in captivity / spent captive.
It is a very beautiful movie, extremely touching, showing the relationship between the mother and the child.
By the end of the movie, we can see thant the mother haves more difficultiesy than her child toin returning in to the real life (or "the real world" / "the world outside"). But her child helps her with very simple children's words to goet through this time and to continue life.