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The Stranger. Part 2. Chapter 9. Damien's wanishing. Please, correct my mistakes. They went on going to the Druid's Town. Damien was walking behind of Lisa. "When we'll come to them? you'll understand more things. Just try to listen carefully." There wasn't any answer. So Lisa looked back, but she didn't look him. "Damien! What is the joke? Where are you?" Damien found himself in a cave, but still heard Lisa. "Welcome!" Said an unknown voice. "Piss off!" Damien answered. "Your way is not right. Join our army and forget about the weak Druids." Suddenly he appeared and Damien could see this disgusting creature. It was a goblin. "If I had the face like you I would join your f..ing army" Damien clearly scoffed. "Damien, I hear you. I know where you got. Don't agree whatever he suggest" Lisa said. "I know. Can you pull out me from here?" Damien rosponded. "It's not the hard task. Just wait a minute." Lisa said.

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The Stranger. Part 2. Chapter 9. Damien's vanishing. Please, correct my mistakes.

They went on going to the Druid's Town. Damien was walking behind of Lisa.
"When we'll come get to them?, you'll understand more things. Just try to listen carefully." There wasn't any answer., Sso Lisa looked back, but she didn't look see him.
"Damien! What i's the joke? Where are you?"
Damien found himself in a cave, but still heard Lisa.
"Welcome!" Said an unknown voice.
"Piss off!" Damien answered.
"Your way is not right. Join our army and forget about the weak Druids." Suddenly he the speaker appeared and Damien could see this disgusting creature. It was a goblin.
"If I had the face like yours I would join your f..ing army" Damien clearly scoffed.
"Damien, I hear you. I know where you got to. Don't agree with whatever he suggest" Lisa said.
"I know. Can you pull out me from of here?" Damien roesponded.
"It's not the a hard task [or just "sure"]. Just wait a minute." Lisa said.
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