Please Correct ; IELTS Writing Task 1
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The graph below shows the number of visitors, come to visit the largest sea beach at Cox's Bazaar in Bangladesh in the yearlong, which is much helpful for earning foreign currency.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
You should write at least 150 words for this task.
The supplied line graph provides information related to foreign tourists coming to visit Cox's Bazaar sea beach in Bangladesh throughout the year. As is presented, the number of gradually increases up to July and then there is a downward trend with fluctuations.
According to the graph, initially, in the month of January, the number of tourists is well under 2 thousand. But from this month, there is an upward trend in the number and it reaches a peak in July amounting well above 10 thousand. Then from July to September, the number of tourists fluctuates and after September there observes a downward trend in their number with a slight rise in the month of October.
Finally, it can be concluded that increased number of tourists visit Cox's Bazaar sea beach, the largest beach in the world, in the middle of the year. But the number of visitors at the beginning and end is very poor.
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Please Correct ; IELTS Writing Task 1
You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.The graph below shows the number of visitors, come to visit the largest sea beach at Cox's Bazaar in Bangladesh in the yearlong, which is much helpful for earning foreign currency.
Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information in the graph below.
You should write at least 150 words for this task.
The supplied line graph provides information related to foreign tourists coming to visit Cox's Bazaar sea beach in Bangladesh throughout the year. As is presented, the number of visitors gradually increases up to July and then there is a downward trend with fluctuations.
According to the graph, initially, in the month of January, the number of tourists is well under 2 two thousand [or "2,000"]. But fFrom this month, there is an upward trend in the number and it that reaches a peak in July amounting to well above 10 ten thousand [or "10,000"]. Then from July to September, the number of tourists fluctuates and after September there one observes a downward trend in their number with a slight rise in the month of October.
Finally, it can be concluded that an increased number of tourists visit Cox's Bazaar sea beach, the largest beach in the world, in the middle of the year., Bbut that the number of visitors at the beginning and end of the year is very poor low.
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