Hi, I want to attend an oral exam by using English. Could you help me to correct it? THX Hi, I want to attend an oral exam by using English, and I wrote the text of a speech, could you help me to correct it? Thanks you very much. First of all, I want to thank you for this opportunity to participate in the oral examination of your school. My name is Ribix, I come from Taiwan. I majored in Automatic control engineering, and will graduate from Tai University next June. I've participated in a research of school, with my qualifications and experience, I feel I am hardworking, responsible and diligent in any project I undertake. Your institute could benefit from my analytical and interpersonal skills. And I am also firmly believe that I’ll be able to make strong contribution to Chung-Hwa in my future career life.

Can anyone help me modify these 6 sentences？THX I had wrote some sentences, and following are the sentences which need to "English native speakers" modify them, please modify it directly, thank you for your great helping^^ ------------------------------------- 01. Hope that I can publish one or two international academic essay. (The primary required also according to university.) 02. I will return to Taiwan for complete field investigations to verify what I learn in Korea, and takes the experiences into our Taiwan tribes. 03. Completes and publishes my master’s thesis. 04. So I will discuss “Multicultural” by the viewpoint of multi-language study. ※There list a simple study motive, please refer to attachment#3-1. 05. I want to stay Korea and continue keeping my doctor degree, and pursue advanced studies "multicultural" in the future. 06. After completing the doctorate, I will possibly continue to stay or return to Taiwan to be engaged in “culture education”, like literature and history worker, Culture Administration officials, cultural department professor and so on.

About "Compound sentences", "Complex sentences" and "Compound-complex sentences" I know there are three sentence structures in English , I try to write some sentences by using them, please help me modify them if having error and tell me the reason, thank you very much. and God bless you.^^ ★ Compound sentences：coordination clauses＋coordination clauses ˙You're right, Juliet, but I would just like to know if I've got the job. ˙The emergency hotline is free, but we can't call this numbers at random. ˙The sunshine is warming, and the wind is soft. ˙He is not only my opponent, but also my best friend. ˙I want to go to see the movie on my birthday, but my girlfriend thinks that is too expensive. ˙I will finish housework by myself, or my mother will be mad at me. ˙Both using cell phone and playing computer for a long time is bad for health. ★ Complex sentences：main clauses＋subordinate clauses ˙We were sorry to hear that Michael has passed away. ˙Mrs. Devlin wants to show us that sitting on exercise balls can ˙keep a healthy sitting posture. ˙Did you know that fun times always pass by quickly? ˙I felt hungry and thirsty after running for a long distance. ˙He went to National Nature Science Museum when he was in Taichung. ˙She got a good grade on the exam, although she didn’t study very hard. ★ Compound-complex sentences：Compound sentences＋subordinate clauses ˙You can start work on November 12, and we need to know when we can prepare a training program. ˙I realized that I was in Korea for I walked on the street with thousands of Koreans. ˙You should blind date with the man who works in a restaurant, and we will come with you. ˙I know this topic is easy to write, but I still don’t know how to answer. ˙He went to school, but his brother remained at home because he had a sore throat. ˙If he changes his mind, we shall know for sure that Joe has learned his lesson, but only time will tell. Please help me modify these sentences if it have error and tell me the reason, thank you very much. ^^

About "Five basic sentence patterns" in English structure, I know there are five basic sentence patterns in English structure, I try to write some sentences by using these "Five basic sentence patterns", please help me modify them and tell me why it is error, thank you very much. 1. Subject + Verb ˙Birds are flying. ˙Marie runs. ˙I know. ˙He swam. ˙She sleeps. 2. Subject + Verb + Object ˙Tomas is a stationmaster of the Taipei Metro. ˙"A Christmas Carol" of Charles Dickens is really funny. ˙I finished my homework tonight. ˙You hurt my heart and I don’t want to see you anymore. ˙I give him a pencil to finish his homework. ˙He earned money for his family. 3. Subect + Verb + Subjective Complement ˙It appears that won't miss the bus. ˙The music sounds fantastic. ˙It sounds of a couple quarreling from the broadcast. ˙I go to school every morning. ˙He played with the dog yesterday morning. ˙They run after me for a long distance, but still can not beyond me. 4. Subect + Verb + Indirect Object + Direct Object ˙My parents give me a warning. ˙I'll show you my comments about this movie. ˙She reveals a secret of her friend to me. ˙I give my girlfriend’s brother a gift. ˙Mark sold Peter a blue turtle. ˙Before he went fishing, Peter fed the blue turtle a dead mouse. 5. Subject + Verb + Object + Objective Complement ˙My parents listen to me seriously. ˙I saw a man laughing wildly in front of the theory. ˙Justin orders a steak in this restaurant. ˙I asked him a question. ˙I found the room empty. ˙She left the door open. Please help me modify these sentences if it have error and tell me the reason, thank you very much. I saw a man laughing wildly in front of the theatre.

How do I say "异国恋情 / be in love with foreigner" in Korean？ How do I say "异国恋情 / be in love with foreigner" in Korean？ "이국연애"...? 아니면...? And how can I express " I like to listen to your sining " & " Though we know each other not for a long time, we are good friend. " in Korean？ Please tell me 존댓말, For example：고마워요, 감사해요My three questions about Korean sentence / word : "异国恋情 / be in love with foreigner" " I like to listen to your sining " " Though we know each other not for a long time, we are good friend. "

How many statement about these Korean setences? (please list them, thanks.) I want to know how to express spoken language about these setence. Could you list them? Thank you very much. For example： "Fighting" - 힘내세요! 、파이팅! (Fighting)、화이팅! 、아자! 아자! 아자!、빠샤! ----------------------------These are my questions--------------------------- 1. Don't cry. 2. I will support you forever. 3. I hope that you can come to Taiwan again. 4. Happy birthday to "you (singular / one person)" 5. Happy birthday to "you (plural / many people)" ----------------------------The end---------------------------The Chinese sentences： 1.不要哭 2.永遠支持你們 3.希望你們在來台灣 4.祝你生日快樂 5.祝你們生日快樂Dean씨, 정말 고마워요. ^^ But I want to know if these sentences in 존댓말, how many kinds of them I can say that? For example： "Thank you" - 고마워요, 감사해요.

전 한국어로 편지를 썼어요, 잘못을 고쳐주세요. 고마워요~^-^ 전 한국어로 편지를 썼어요, 잘못을 고쳐주세요. 고마워요~ -----------------------------------------시작---------------------------------------- 안녕하세요? 저는라빅스예요. 기억하고 있어요? 한국에 머물은 기간에 정말 즐거웠어요. ｏｏ이오빠와 ｏｏ씨께서 저희에게 아름다운 기억을 남겨 주셨서 정말로 감사드려요. 한국을 정말 좋아해요. 당신들과 친구가 되고 싶어요. 바쁘시다는 것은 잘 알고 있어요. 길고 긴 겨울이 시작되었으니까 건강 조심하세요. -----------------------------------------End----------------------------------------- 잘 부탁드릴께요, 정말 고마워요~Keun씨와 혜지비씨께 감사합니다. ^-^

Can anyone help me revised the manuscript? I try to write a essay about the connection between China martial art and phenomenology, and I will hand out this essay at 11/12 night, but I don't mastery of grammar, can anyone help me revised the manuscript? Thanks for your great help, and god bless you ^.^ ----------------------------This is my manuscript ↓------------------ This research attempted to use the phenomenology psychological method to discuss the essence of martial arts. First, we analyzed the argument, “practicing martial arts is a way to approaching fullness”, like “the practice of Zen” and “martial art is the practice of classic Chinese philosophy”, and we can find both the arguments are not enough to discuss this topic. We will inquire the essence of martial arts by taking the depth interview as the research technique. Then we can provide the readers a different thinking which is about martial arts to reach the further introspections, and attempt the preliminary inspection about “Martial Arts Treatment”.