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About "Five basic sentence patterns" in English structure, I know there are five basic sentence patterns in English structure, I try to write some sentences by using these "Five basic sentence patterns", please help me modify them and tell me why it is error, thank you very much. 1. Subject + Verb ˙Birds are flying. ˙Marie runs. ˙I know. ˙He swam. ˙She sleeps. 2. Subject + Verb + Object ˙Tomas is a stationmaster of the Taipei Metro. ˙"A Christmas Carol" of Charles Dickens is really funny. ˙I finished my homework tonight. ˙You hurt my heart and I don’t want to see you anymore. ˙I give him a pencil to finish his homework. ˙He earned money for his family. 3. Subect + Verb + Subjective Complement ˙It appears that won't miss the bus. ˙The music sounds fantastic. ˙It sounds of a couple quarreling from the broadcast. ˙I go to school every morning. ˙He played with the dog yesterday morning. ˙They run after me for a long distance, but still can not beyond me. 4. Subect + Verb + Indirect Object + Direct Object ˙My parents give me a warning. ˙I'll show you my comments about this movie. ˙She reveals a secret of her friend to me. ˙I give my girlfriend’s brother a gift. ˙Mark sold Peter a blue turtle. ˙Before he went fishing, Peter fed the blue turtle a dead mouse. 5. Subject + Verb + Object + Objective Complement ˙My parents listen to me seriously. ˙I saw a man laughing wildly in front of the theory. ˙Justin orders a steak in this restaurant. ˙I asked him a question. ˙I found the room empty. ˙She left the door open. Please help me modify these sentences if it have error and tell me the reason, thank you very much. I saw a man laughing wildly in front of the theatre.

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Your sentences are really good, there were just a couple thing that sounded strange to me or didn't make sense: "A Christmas Carol" of Charles Dickens is really funny. -you would want to say "by Charles Dickens" instead of "of Charles Dickens" It appears that won't miss the bus. -you forgot the subject - You probably meant to say "It appears that I won't miss the bus" It sounds of a couple quarreling from the broadcast. -this sentence just confused me, I am not sure exactly what you are trying to say - did the broadcast cause the couple to quarrel? Also, you wouldn't say "it sounds of..." - "it sounds like..." is better to say. I saw a man laughing wildly in front of the theory. -I just don't understand what you mean by "theory" - is it a place? other than that, the sentence makes sense. They run after me for a long distance, but still can not beyond me. -you can't use "beyond" in this sense. You would have to say "but still can not pass me" ˙She reveals a secret of her friend to me. -this technically makes sense, but "She reveals a sentence about her friend to me" is better. Hope this helps...let me know if you have any more questions, or if anything I said was unclear.

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