We have different identities in different languages each, as they said

I sometimes listen to a podcast called "All Ears English".
In an episode, I'm not sure which one, the hosts talked about different identities we had when we spoke different languages.

It's so interesting, isn't it?
I agree with them.
I'm so excited when I speak English (trying to speak). I find something different to be thinking and speaking in Japanese.

私は時々、All Ears English というポッドキャストを聴いています。
そのエピソードの中で、何番かは忘れてしまったけれど、異なる言語ごとに異なるidentity がある、という話をしていました。

とても興味深いですよね？
私もそう思います。
英語を話す時(話そうとする時)すごくドキドキして物事を日本語で考えている時と何か違うなぁと思うんです。

can anyone help me with my writing? i have made a paragraph . please correct it for me, thank you

Topic: Should students study away from home?Why?
Many students study away from home for their higher study, but some people say that it has many disadvantages. In reality, it is the complete opposite. This paragraph will indicate the benefits that studying far from home brings students.
First and foremost, it makes students more independent. Studying far from home means living in a dormitory or with relatives. Students have to look after themselves by cooking their meals, washing their clothes, and so on. They might find a part time job to earn money. This prepares them for adulthood.
Second, living in another evironment prepares students. As a result, they will accumulate many good experiences in the future. The more they face, the braver and more experienced they become.
Students with protective parents can have more freedom abroad. They can do whatever they like so long as it is safe and innocent. For example, they can go out with friends, go shopping, and so on. This freedom is the most attractive part that studying away from home gives its students.
In conclusion, students should study away from home providing that they are mature. They will realize that the world is bigger and more interesting than they ever thought possible.

hello

I'm glad to learn a new language and to speak English daily. I work in an electric field. I live in a small town with my wife and four children. My purpose in life is to have a real friend who can be a mirror for me.