can anyone help me with my writing? i have made a paragraph . please correct it for me, thank you Topic: Should students study away from home?Why? Many students study away from home for their higher study. But some people said that it has many disadvantages. But the reality is completely opposite. This paragraph will indicate some benefits that studying far from home brings students. First and foremost, it makes students more independent. Because studying far from home means living in a dormitory or with relatives. Students have to look after themselves, cooking their meals, washing their clothes and so on. Maybe they have to find a part time jo to earn money. this helps them so much when they become adults. In the second place, living in another evironment, students will collide society. As a result they will accumulate many experiences which are good for them in the future. The more they face up with the life, the more they become brave and experienced. More over, students whose parents are so protective can be freer. They can do whatever they like,of course with condition that it is safe and innocent.For example, they can go out with friends, go shopping and so on. It seems to be the most attractive benefit that studying away from home give students. In conclusion, student should study away from home if necessary, providing that they are mature. Then they will realize that the world is bigger and more interesting than they ever thought