Can anyone correct these 2 essays? :)
Hi Albert!
Your situation is absolutely terrible. You are unemployed and you should change to a portfolio career. It's a new way of work in which you have several different part-time jobs instead of a single traditional full-time job.
I think it can be a good solution for you, because nowadays there are fewer full-time jobs. You could work in different companies and you would learn something different from each of them and additionally you could work at home. Even though working at home can be a bit dull. Moreover, you might be a bit stressed doing different things at the same time. But I think you would succeed in this way of working. You are very responsible and you meet deadlines on time.
It is possibly your best option for working. You only have to think about it and decide. If you need anything I will be here to help you.
QUALITY OF LIFE
Governments have a lot of responsibility for the quality of life in developing countries. But citizens have more responsibility in this. Citizens must be concerned about many different aspects to improve our quality of life.
Firstly, it's very important to have a good environment . It influences our lives. People should take care of the environment and respect nature. It would be better if we recycled and conserved our resources. If we did that, our planet would be cleaner and conditions would be better.
Secondly, being nice to people provides a better quality of life. We should respect everyone, to speak respectfully with other people and try to understand other peoples' behaviour. For instance, if you are partying and shouting during the night, you should try to understand the reaction of your neighbours since they want to rest.
In conclusion, we should follow these examples to improve our quality of live. We have the key to improve things and for this reason we should start to do it now.
