Can anyone correct these 2 essays? :)

I think it can be a good solution for you, because nowadays there are fewer full-time jobs. You could work in different companies and you would learn something different from each of them and additionally you could work at home. Even though working at home can be a bit dull. Moreover, you might be a bit stressed doing different things at the same time. But I think you would succeed in this way of working. You are very responsible and you meet deadlines on time.

It is possibly your best option for working. You only have to think about it and decide. If you need anything I will be here to help you.


QUALITY OF LIFE

Governments have a lot of responsibility for the quality of life in developing countries. But citizens have more responsibility in this. Citizens must be concerned about many different aspects to improve our quality of life.

Firstly, it's very important to have a good environment . It influences our lives. People should take care of the environment and respect  nature. It would be better if we recycled and conserved our resources. If we did that, our planet would be cleaner and conditions would be better.

Secondly, being nice to people provides a better quality of life. We should respect everyone, to speak respectfully with other people and try to understand other peoples' behaviour. For instance, if you are partying and shouting during the night, you should try to understand the reaction of your neighbours since they want to rest.

In conclusion, we should follow these examples to improve our quality of live. We have the key to improve things and for this reason we should start to do it now.

Hi Albert! 

Your situation is not a god one. You are unemployed and you should change to a portfolio career. It's a new way of work in which you have different part-time jobs instead of a traditional full-time job. 
I think it could be a good solution for you, because nowadays traditional fulltime jobs are scarce. You could work in different companies and you would learn different skills from them and be able to work at home. Even though working at home can be a bit boring. Moreover, you might be a bit stressed doing different things at the same time. But I think you could succeed in this way of working. You are very responsible and you meet deadlines at the correct time. 
Maybe this is your best path for work. You only have to think about it and to decide. If you have any questions, feel free to ask. 


QUALITY OF LIFE 

Governments have a lot of responsibility for the quality of life in developing countries. But citizens have more responsibility for this on a personal level. Citizens must be concerned about different aspects to improve their own quality of life, and that of othrs. 

Firstly, a good environment is extremely important. It influences our lives. People should take care of the environment and respect nature. It would be perfect if we recycled and managed our resources better. If we did that, our planet would be cleaner and would be in better condition.

Secondly, being nice to people reaps huge benefits for everyone. We have to respect everyone, to speak respectfully to each other and moreover, to understand the way other people behave. For instance, if you are partying and shouting during the night, you have to understand the reaction of your neighbours because they want to rest. 

In conclusion, we should follow these examples to improve our quality of life. We have the key to improve that and for this reason we have to start to do it now.