Article : The most important person Hi everyone! I would like you to correct this article I've written . Thanks in advance ! The most important person Do you know what it is to have a person you can tell your deepest secrets? If so, you probably have a best friend. All of us have friends. Some have a lot of friends while others only have a few of these ones . We need friends, we need them to go out, play sports , enjoy ...However, it is clear that there is always one of them that is the special friend, your best friend. It goes without saying that I've also got a best friend who I met while playing a thrilling football match. He was playing as a goalkeeper in the reval team . When the match ended, I came to congratulate him. That's how we met. Since then, we have been friends. He is so special and that's the reason why we have never separated . I can tell him all my secrets and I know that he will never tell them to other people. Furthermore, we enjoy all the time we spend together. Are you a fortunate to have this kind of treasure ?

Letter Hi everybody, I would like you to have a look at this letter and tell me whether there are some mistakes or not. Thanks in advance Dear Pat, Thanks for your letter about a project on family life. In the past, mothers were who did the household chores and fathers were who worked and earned money .Also, mothers looked after children. Luckily, this fact changed. In the present day , both mothers and fathers do all family things like working to keep economically the family, teaching the children and doing the cooking. When it comes to Christmas, all the family gets together on 25th December in the biggest house. I'm looking forward to seeing you. Best wishes

A Letter Hi everybody, I would like you to have a look at this letter and tell me whether there are some mistakes or not. Thanks in advance Dear Pat, Thanks for your letter about a project on family life. In the past, mothers were who did the household chores and fathers were who worked and earned money .Also, mothers looked after children. Luckily, this fact changed. In the present day , both mothers and fathers do all family things like working to keep economically the family, teaching the children and doing the cooking. When it comest to Christmas, all the family gets together on 25th December in the biggest house. I'm looking forward to seeing you. Best wishes

Writing : E-mail Hi everyone! I would like you to correct this e-mail for me. Thanks in advance Dear Anne Thanks for your e-mail. The best time of year to visit my country is in summer because it is the best weather and you can make a lot of plans like going to the beach and swimming in the sea, where you can meet people your own age. Also, if you visit my city, you will meet my friends. If you're travelling in summer, you shouldn't bring any coats and boots. You have to carry some swimmingclothes like a swimsuit and also T-shirts and shorts. With respect to travelling with you, I would like it because I could show you my city and introduce you to my friends. I'm looking forward to seeing you in summer. Best wishes Feel free to modify whatever you may think is not correct. Thank you

Essay : Fashion is taking over our lives Good evening! I would like you to correct this essay for me and if it is necessary to modify any sentence, feel free to do it ! Thanks in advance! Fashion is taking over our lives The type of clothes we wear has changed much since humans started using them. What's more, the way people feel abour their appearance has changed with it. For some people, looking good is one of their priorities when they leave their houses. However, it is not that important. Despite of it, nowadays, you can be judged by the clothes you wear or your skin colour. It is important only when you attend meetings or job interviews and you want to give a first good impression. Clothes, as the years go through ( or over the years ), have changed their appearance as well as their prices. Clothes are so overpriced that some people cannot afford to dress properly as not everybody is willing to pay thousands euros for a piece of clothing. As for clothes' appearance , that has been revolutionary. People went from wearing boring clothes to wearing bright coloured clothes. A simple piece of clothing changed a lot of people's minds. To sum up, clothes can be something really important to everybody. They give you a whole new perspective. I used the word 'clothes' many times. I would like you to give some synonyms to make this essay more natural. Thanks !

Grazie a oppure Grazie per Ciao a tutti ! non so quando si usa la preposizione 'a' e 'per' con la parola grazie. Qualcuno me lo potrebbe spiegare ? Grazie !

Essay : Fashion is taking over our lives Good evening! I would like you to correct this essay for me and if it is necessary to modify any sentence, feel free to do it ! Thanks in advance! Fashion is taking over our lives The type of clothes we wear has changed much since humans started using them. What's more, the way people feel abour their appearance has changed with it. For some people, looking good is one of their priorities when they leave their houses. However, it is not that important. Despite of it, nowadays, you can be judged by the clothes you wear or your skin colour. It is important only when you attend meetings or job interviews and you want to give a first good impression. Clothes, as the years go through ( or over the years ), have changed their appearance as well as their prices. Clothes are so overpriced that some people cannot afford to dress properly as not everybody is willing to pay thousands euros for a piece of clothing. As for clothes' appearance , that has been revolutionary. People went from wearing boring clothes to wearing bright coloured clothes. A simple piece of clothing changed a lot of people's minds. To sum up, clothes can be something really important to everybody. They give you a whole new perspective. I used the word 'clothes' many times. I would like to give some synonyms to make this essay mora natural. Thanks !