Writing : E-mail
Hi everyone! I would like you to correct this e-mail for me. Thanks in advance
Dear Anne
Thanks for your e-mail.
The best time of year to visit my country is in summer because it is the best weather and you can make a lot of plans like going to the beach and swimming in the sea, where you can meet people your own age. Also, if you visit my city, you will meet my friends.
If you're travelling in summer, you shouldn't bring any coats and boots. You have to carry some swimmingclothes like a swimsuit and also T-shirts and shorts.
With respect to travelling with you, I would like it because I could show you my city and introduce you to my friends.
I'm looking forward to seeing you in summer.
Best wishes
Feel free to modify whatever you may think is not correct. Thank you
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Hi Antonio,
It sounds good. "Swimmingclothes" is swimming clothes as two words. Saying "in summer" is understandable and is often expressed as in the summer. : )
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