Моя компания хочет сосредоточиться на программном обеспечении и удалении данных (форматирование жёстких дисков) В связи с этим, мы продаём ту часть данного компании, которая специализируется на ремонте электронных устройств.

Нет, мы говорим УДАЛИТЬ ИНФОРМАЦИЮ/ФОРМАТИРОВАТЬ ДИСКИ...Мы можем сказать стереть файлы, но в разговорной речи

IELTS response recall: historic places

Historic places are being damaged and destroyed.
What makes this happen?
What do you think should be done to change this situation?


Strange as it may seem, considered taking irreplaceable evidence of the civilization into consideration, historic places suffer from severe damages and destructions.(uncountable) There are many factors contributing to this result, which boil down to (semi-formal style, not informal)  the ignorance  both on levels: individual and governmental.

When it comes to the damages of to historical places, the ignorance of individual should hold responsibility. Time and time again Throughout centuries have we witnessed the indelible signatures and casual drawings on the walls of historical buildings. And ignorant to the warnings against taking pictures of the historic sites, the flooding tourists are always busy flashing these places, building their happiness on the speeding aging process or other damages caused by the exposure to lights. Such seemingly irrelevant behaviors, accumulated to some extent, can be detrimental to historic buildings, letting alone dropping litters and damages caused by uncontrolled kids.

On the other hand, the ignorance of the leading circle is decisive in the destructions of historic buildings. Such kind of ignorance inevitably lead to insufficient funding, or even worse, the tearing down of historical places.

In light of all above Overall, not only should the government emphasize on the protection of historical places but also the individuals should raise their awareness of the significance and delicacy of these places. Only by joint effort can we foresee the future with all traces of development of our culture, technology and society.

Too many sentences with inversion...

It is not even 250words.. Let me cry for a while quietly..

About learning English

Hello Everybody. This is my first notebook entry in on italki. Sometimes I am frustrated about  with my English level. I tried to improve it but sometimes I had get confused about making sentences properly. I memorized some vocabulary with examples and by reading newspaper, Watching movies, Listening to music etc. I found that English has its own expressions, which are it's not the same as in my native language so I think I need to know it's own patterns or style. Many times I was confused, when I didn't find any grammar rules or may be I just don't know about those types of uses (of what?). Is their any better ideas or tips? Please share them with me and give me proper guide lines. My writing skill isn't good. I don't know whether or not  I can express my words properly or not. I will be very happy if you teach me or give me few tips for better approach. Please I beg from you. In Which activities or works may help me the most to learn English?

I think, you should study English with a teacher, not by yourself.