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(CPE) The Part Of the Essay. Is it grammatically and logically correct? In my opinion, both texts have the points that are worth mentioning. For instance, text A clearly makes the point that if people regarded nature as a unique organism which should not be disturbed, a great deal of environmental problems would be prevented. Moreover Furthermore, it advocates the need of educating people in terms of respect and care for nature. Text B acknowledges the issue as well, but it misses out any possibility of improvement. Undoubtedly, there is some truth in this view; however, I’m convinced that there are some methods that could be implemented to stop ruining our planet. In conclusion, I think that we could definitely derive benefit from a clear understanding of the social and economic impact on nature, acquiring a realistic view on the subject. Nevertheless, it is also true, that we are still able to tackle the problem. For instance, we could avoid hunting as a leisure opportunity and reduce deforestation by using e-books and online materials--such steps are still available for the majority of people.

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