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IELTS response recall: historic places Historic places are being damaged and destroyed. What makes this happen? What do you think should be done to change this situation? Strange as it may seem, considered irreplaceable evidence of civilization, historic places suffer from severe damages and destructions. There are many factors contributing to this result, which boil down to the ignorance both on the individual level and governmental level. When it comes to the damages of historical places, the ignorance of individual should held responsible. Time and time again have we witnessed the indelible signatures and casual drawings on the walls of historical buildings. And ignorant to the warnings against taking pictures of the historic sites, the flooding tourists are always busy flashing these places, building their happiness on the speeding aging process or other damages caused by the exposure to lights. Such seemingly irrelevant behaviors, accumulated to some extent, can be detrimental to historic buildings, letting alone dropping litters and damages caused by uncontrolled kids. On the other hand, the ignorance of the leading circle is decisive in the destructions of historic buildings. Such kind of ignorance inevitably lead to insufficient funding, or even worse, the tearing down of historical places. In light of all above, not only should the government emphasize on the protection of historical places but also the individual should raise their awareness of the significance and delicacy of these places. Only by joint effort can we foresee a future with all traces of development of our culture, technology and society. It is not even 250words.. Let me cry for a while quietly..

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IELTS response recall: historic places

Historic places are being damaged and destroyed.
What makes this happen?
What do you think should be done to change this situation?


Strange as it may seem, considered taking irreplaceable evidence of the civilization into consideration, historic places suffer from severe damages and destructions.(uncountable) There are many factors contributing to this result, which boil down to (semi-formal style, not informal)  the ignorance  both on levels: individual and governmental.

When it comes to the damages of to historical places, the ignorance of individual should hold responsibility. Time and time again Throughout centuries have we witnessed the indelible signatures and casual drawings on the walls of historical buildings. And ignorant to the warnings against taking pictures of the historic sites, the flooding tourists are always busy flashing these places, building their happiness on the speeding aging process or other damages caused by the exposure to lights. Such seemingly irrelevant behaviors, accumulated to some extent, can be detrimental to historic buildings, letting alone dropping litters and damages caused by uncontrolled kids.

On the other hand, the ignorance of the leading circle is decisive in the destructions of historic buildings. Such kind of ignorance inevitably lead to insufficient funding, or even worse, the tearing down of historical places.

In light of all above Overall, not only should the government emphasize on the protection of historical places but also the individuals should raise their awareness of the significance and delicacy of these places. Only by joint effort can we foresee the future with all traces of development of our culture, technology and society.

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It is not even 250words.. Let me cry for a while quietly..

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