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Could someone please correct my essay for TOEFL?
Nowadays, food has become easier to prepare. Has this change improved the way people live? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
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Recently it has become much easier for us to
gain access to
pre-cooked meals. We can easily find
ready-to-eat meals, including sandwiches, prepared lunch boxes, and salads to go at any supermarket or convenience
stores store.
I believe this change has improved the quality of our lives in several ways. There are three main reasons to support my idea.
First of all, buying pre-made food allows us to save
more time. Since we don’t have to cook
ourselves, we can do something else in
the that time,
which are something which is more valuable
to do for us
to do. We could study, work, and enjoy our hobbies,
and they will lead leading to
a more fulfilling life. In my experience, thanks to
cooked ready-made food, I am able to spend more time
on learning English. It is very helpful
to when work
ing with foreign coworkers at my office. I strongly feel that having time to study English makes my daily life more meaningful.
Second,
precooked food helps us to stay healthy. There are usually labels on the food, which show what ingredients and
what the quality of nutrition they contain, including calories. This helps us to calculate
the calories
we consume and
it also lets us know what nutrition we lack
of. In addition, if you have something you want to avoid
to eat
ing, you can just check the label before the purchase. For example, I always buy food without
flower flour, and
it this indeed help
s me keep myself in shape.
Finally, buying pre-made food saves
your money. If you have to cook something from scratch, you need to buy all of the ingredients, condiment
s, and seasoning. Also it even
need requires you to have a decent kitchen and pay electricity. It costs a lot in total. However if you buy something that is
already ready to be had, you don’t have to worry about the additional expenses.
For these three reasons, I think having an easier way to prepare food has improved our lives.
