Application letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m an undergraduate student. I’m writing this letter to enquire about the possibility of finding a child who is in need financial of help.
These are my <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Listed below are the </s>basic requirements: The child who wants <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">is love</s> to study who <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">has</s> is just starting schooling in a remote area. My plan is to offer the tuition fee every year until he/she has graduated. <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Likewise</s>, Also, I will provide him/her <s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">life</s> aid such as 100 yuan living expenses each month. I would like to give money directly to her/<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">him</s> his family’s account.
<s> </s><s style="background-color: rgb(235, 214, 255);">My thanks to you for your help are beyond words</s>* Thank you for your help. I’m looking forward to your reply.<s style="background-color: rgb(255, 255, 0);">Be in touch.</s>
Sincerely,
Li Ming
<ul><li>This sentence is not quite natural sounding, even if I changed the grammar. "Beyond words" is an very emotional phrase, which would be more suitable in a situation where your life has been changed. </li></ul>