Application letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m an undergraduate student.I’m writing this letter to inquire about the possibility of finding a child who is need financial help.
Listed below are the basic requirements.The child is love to study who has just starting schooling in a remote area.My plan is offer tuition fee every year until he/she graduated.Likewise,I will provide him/her life aid such as 100 yuan living expense each month.I would like to give money directly to her/him family’s account.
My thanks to you for your help are beyond words.I’m looking forward to your reply.Be in touch.
Sincerely,
Li Ming
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Application letter
Dear Sir or Madam,
I’m an undergraduate student. I’m writing this letter to enquire about the possibility of finding a child who is in need financial of help.
These are my Listed below are the basic requirements: The child who wants is love to study who has is just starting schooling in a remote area. My plan is to offer the tuition fee every year until he/she has graduated. Likewise, Also, I will provide him/her life aid such as 100 yuan living expenses each month. I would like to give money directly to her/him his family’s account.
Sincerely,
Li Ming
- This sentence is not quite natural sounding, even if I changed the grammar. "Beyond words" is an very emotional phrase, which would be more suitable in a situation where your life has been changed.
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