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- 解读肢体语言, 请纠正我的中文 :) 我试着把我想说的话翻译成英语 我想尝试着使用的话见（） 我看中国视频无声音。我读的肢体语言来理解。男孩跑到女孩说了些什么。他大概问了一下时间，因为那个女孩看了看表。男孩还看了一下手表，看着不爽。他的手表大概说了错误的时间。他们聊了（时间长度） ，然后他跑了。他大概是较晚(达到）的地方。我可以看到（强度），因为他们说话是急，看着不爽。我觉得他需要（放松）和（慢）一点点。我看有声视频后。我主要是正确的。男孩的手表坏了，所以他问女孩的时间。这是9:25和他有一个班10:00。他的日子很（剧烈）有很多事情要做。他（慢跑）的距离，达到校车。他非常强调。我想我要（辛苦）了解没有声音。这是很容易的。你只需要为（心理安静）和（思想专一） 。能够理解的对话基础上的肢体动作表演（形神合一） 。 I watch chinese video without sound. I read body language to understand. The boy ran up to the girl and said something. He probably asked about the time because the girl looked at her watch. The boy also looked at his watch and looked unhappy. His watch probably said the wrong time. They talked for a (时间长度) and then he ran off. He was probably late (达到) somewhere. I could see (强度) because they talked fast and looked unhappy. I think he needed to (放松) and (慢) a little. I also watch the video with sound after. I was mostly correct. The boy's watch was broken so he asked the girl for the time. It was 9:25 and he had a class at 10:00. His day is very (剧烈) with a lot to do. He (慢跑) away to reach school bus. He was very stressed. I thought I have to (辛苦) to understand with no sound. It was pretty easy. You just need to be (心理安静) and (思想专一). Being able to understand conversation based on body movements shows (形神合一). 谢谢！！April 5, 201520
The Place I Love Most
Please help me check it. Thank you! :)
An ancient brick house, a tall pagoda tree, and a small yard--these were all about the memories of my grandparents’ hometown; the entire world of my childhood, and the place I love most.
I still remember that, when I was little, my grandmother always loved to sit on a wicker chair and watch me run about the yard and chase after my kitten in the evening. She always listened carefully with an affable smile, while I was excitedly talking about my happy experiences about the daytime and the new people I met. It seemed that hearing my laughter was the greatest joy to her. When I was tired, I often nestled in her arms, listening quietly to her nursery rhymes. I could even hear her breathing steadily and feel the warmth.
Then I would just look at the dark blue sky and count the stars. “Look at those stars, grandma! They look like a smiley face!” I shouted. “Yeah, and those ones make up some butterflies!” my grandma said and smiled. The yard was so tranquil that I gradually fell asleep in my grandma’s arms. I can dimly hear her familiar nursery rhymes again, and I can feel her clapping on my back lightly. Time stood still with her company.
The small yard is full of cozy memories between my grandma and me; memories that made my childhood just like a dream. This is why I love it the most.I hope I helped :) It was very good; I just changed a few tense issues and changed the grammar a little bit on one or two sentences.
0 votedMarch 8, 20152Could you please correct?
,Due to not many phone calls to our virtual office last months we have no choice and we decide to cancel this service but we would like to still keep our address. We can not afford price of nearly £100 sometimes only for 1 or 2 phone calls during the month.Could you please give me the price for address services only?,,
Because we did not get many phone calls in or virtual office these last few months, we have no choice but to cancel this service. However, we would still like to keep our address. This said, we cannot afford to pay £100 for just 1 or 2 phone calls a month. Could you please give me the price for just the address services? Thank you!
0 votedMarch 8, 20150- 食疗, 请纠正我的中文 :) 我试着把我想说的话翻译成英语 我想尝试着使用的话见（） 有关无线电通话（阴性食物）和（阳性食物）。它说，食品（有益）。这些食物就像阴和阳。他们需要（平衡）为良好（饮食）的治疗。这些食物有很多的（抗氧化剂），身体健康和（生命能量）。牛奶，蜂蜜和香蕉是阴性食物。黄瓜，苹果，西瓜，芦笋，更多也是阴性食物。人们体验（焦虑）和（炎症），需要吃更多的阴性食物。食物咖啡，牛肉，荔枝，生姜，樱桃，桃子有（阳性食物）。这些食物有利于（降低）（胆固醇）和（血压）。它们也擅长（改善）（消化），（循环系统），和（心血管的）。绿茶和姜是最好的吃。请记住，你需要平衡（饮食）是非常健康的。 The radio talk about (阴性食物) and (阳性食物). It said the food is (有益)。These foods are like yin and yang. they need to be (平衡) for good (饮食) treatment. These foods have lots of (抗氧化剂) for good health and (生命能量). The milk, honey, and bananas are阴性食物. cucumbers, apples, watermelons, asparagus, and more are also阴性食物. People that experience (焦虑) and (炎症) need to eat more 阴性食物. The foods coffee, beef, lychee, ginger, cherry, and peaches are (阳性食物). These foods are good for (降低)( 胆固醇) and (血压). They are also good at (改善)( 消化),( 循环系统), and (心血管的). Green tea and ginger are the best ones to eat. Remember that you need at balanced (饮食) to be very healthy. 谢谢！！March 8, 201550
- 云南白药，请纠正我的中国:) 我试着翻译一下我想说的话成英语 :) 我想尝试使用的话（） 该草药云南白药是众所周知的帮助许多谁(经历)的症状。它有助于消肿止痛，用于跌打损伤，瘀血肿痛，风湿疼痛。补救的办法应该使这些症状更(舒服)。它并不能治愈(感冒)。它也没有帮助(咽喉痛)。最好局部使用于患处这种待遇。云南白药有37个成分。它不应该被用在皮肤破损。患有皮肤过敏也不宜使用，它不应该被留在时间超过12小时。产品应如果(发炎)除去。如果你想试试这个，(看病)，让他们(检查)你。无论他们(开处方)，用它只有(按处方规定)。医生可能会开处方你(吃西药)，而不是(吃中药)，你应该使用他们开处方。 The herbal medicine 云南白药 is known to help many who (经历) various symptoms. It helps reduce swelling and pain, bruises,瘀血肿痛, and rheumatic pain. This remedy should make these symptoms more (舒服). It does not cure (感冒). It also did not help (咽喉痛). The best way to use this treatment is by topical use on the affected area. 云南白药 has 37 ingredients. It should not be used on broken skin. It should not be used by people who suffer from skin allergies and it should not be left on for longer than 12 hours. The product should be removed if if the area becomes (发炎). If you want to try this treatment, go to the (看病) so that they can (检查) you. Whatever they (开处方), only use it (开处方). Your doctor may prescribe you (吃西药) instead of (吃中药). You should use what is prescribed by your doctor. 谢谢你！March 3, 201541
- 关于针灸，请大家指正:) 针灸起源于中国古代。它利用(穴位)顺利(经络)。这有助于(血液循环)和使身体正常工作。它还有助于(阴)和(阳)的(平衡)。如果它们不在(和谐)，一个人可以容易生病。针灸也增强免疫力，(排除毒素)。它具有很少或几乎没有副作用。它也是简单方便。通过改变(阴经)和(阳经)，患者体验到快速，廉价的(减少)在疼痛和疾病。由于这些原因，针灸被越来越多的接受和世界各地的蔓延。 我试着翻译一下我想说的话成英语 我想尝试使用的话（） Acupuncture originated in ancient china. It uses 穴位 to smooth 经络. This helps the 血液循环 and allows the body to function properly. It also helps the 平衡 of 阴 and 阳. If they are not in 和谐, a person can get sick easily. Acupuncture also enhances immunity and 排除毒素. It has little to no side effects. It is also simple and convenient. By altering 阴经 and 阳经, patients experience a quick, inexpensive 减少 in ache and illness. Due to these reasons, acupuncture is growing more accepted and is spreading across the world. 谢谢！March 1, 201510
- 云南白药转让, 请指正:) i tried to translate what i wanted to say into english :) I want to try to use the words in () 该草药云南白药是众所周知的帮助许多谁(经历)的症状。它有助于消肿止痛，用于跌打损伤，瘀血肿痛，风湿疼痛。补救的办法应该使这些症状更(舒服)。它并不能治愈(感冒)。它也没有帮助(咽喉痛)。最好局部使用于患处这种待遇。云南白药有37个成分。它不应该被用在皮肤破损。患有皮肤过敏也不宜使用，它不应该被留在时间超过12小时。产品应如果(发炎)除去。如果你想试试这个，(看病)，让他们(检查)你。无论他们(开处方)，用它只有(按处方规定)。医生可能会开处方你(吃西药)，而不是(吃中药)，你应该使用他们开处方。 The herbal medicine 云南白药 is known to help many who (经历) various symptoms. It helps reduce swelling and pain, bruises,瘀血肿痛, and rheumatic pain. This remedy should make these symptoms more (舒服). It does not cure (感冒). It also did not help (咽喉痛). The best way to use this treatment is by topical use on the affected area. 云南白药 has 37 ingredients. It should not be used on broken skin. It should not be used by people who suffer from skin allergies and it should not be left on for longer than 12 hours. The product should be removed if if the area becomes (发炎). If you want to try this treatment, go to the (看病) so that they can (检查) you. Whatever they (开处方), only use it (开处方). Your doctor may prescribe you (吃西药) instead of (吃中药). You should use what is prescribed by your doctor.March 1, 201510
Writing Passage - titles are usually capitalized
Since Spring Festival (the Spring Festival is an event, so it is captialized), I haven't writing written (writing is a present tense verb. That means the action is happening at that moment. Since you used the word haven't, you are referring to the past, meaning you must use the past tense version of writing which is written) passage.
The sentence "Since Spring Festival, I haven't written a passage." is not a wrong sentence, but it is not the casual way of speaking. We normally say, "I haven't written a passage since Spring Festival."
I found that it is a better way to improve English (degrace? I'm not sure how you want to use this word. I have never seen it in this context before) through reading other people's passages. (because people own their passages, people must be corrected to people's to show possession of the passages, and passages must have the s at the end because there is more than one passage for all the different people. They don't all share one passage, there are more than one.)Now, this sentence is not technically incorrect either, but it can sound more fluent slightly altered. "I found that it is a better way to improve English through reading other people's passages." can be changed to "I found that reading other people's passages is the best way to learn English." In the original sentence, you used it, which is referring to an object we, as readers, don't know. To help fix this, put what it is referring to in its place--which in this case is reading other people's passages. I also changed is a better into best because if you say better, you need to be comparing things. Like apples are better than oranges. You can't just say apples are better because we don't know what you are comparing the apples to. Alternatively, you can say apples are best because we can assume you like apples the most out of anything you compare it to.
because own passage is still keep myself word. others use the different way to express their things. (I'm not exactly sure how to correct this sentence, but I rewrote my interpretation of what you were trying to say.)I find it helpful to read other people's passages because others express themselves differently in their passages than how I express myself in my own passages.
I think it is very useful for me. (good as is)I hope I helped! :)
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