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I write to preparing prepare for the test tomorrow . Yesterday my teacher said it isn't wasn't quite good but now she can't help me . So I hope anyone can make suggestions
Daily activities
Every morning , I often get up at 8 o'clock. Then I take a bus order to go to school . And I can usually eat some sandwiches for breakfast when I'm waiting on the way. If I have classes all day , I will have lunch at the food stores. but in return Otherwise, I will get home straightaway.
In the evening after school my family have dinner together at 5 pm . After And an hour later, I have to go to study English at Uc-Anh center . It takes me about 10 minutes to go there on foot . On Monday, Wednesday and Friday, I study by myself from 7 :30 to 8 :30 at the family mart . However My English class finishs at 9 o'clock is on Tuesday , Thursday and Saturday. It usually finishes at 9pm <em>(2 câu từ "My English class..." nên để lên trước câu "On Monday...")</em>
On the weekend , sometimes I hold a small party or go put hang out with my friends . Badminton and kungfu are our favorite sports which we choose to play in the free time We play it a lot in our free time.
At home , I always help my mother do my houseworks . Finally , The day ends with me reading books and preparing lessons before bedtime . I'm glad happy with my life0 votedNovember 6, 20150How astronomy changes my life
Currently, I really love astronomy. Here in Brazil, I don't hasn't have astronomy as a school subject in public schools, it is taught in physics, without much emphasis.
I remember when I was a child in the fifth year of school and I opened the science book, in the final book chapter , there had was a caption about the solar system, explaining about either planets. This chapter wasn't explained by the teacher over the year, unfortunately, but I read it at home alone. I thought that it was incredible and fascinating!! I want to know more about it!!
In the public schools principally, the teaching is bad. Basically, about for astronomy, I was had to searching alone, in books and before, hereafter, in on the internet. The Internet! It revolutionized my learning! I was born after Carl Sagan died. Maybe, without the internet, I never world would have known he him. I'm a big fan of scientists divulgers like Carl Sagan and Neil Degrasse Tyson.
The astronomy (and general science in general) helped me to open my mind and see the universe! It helped me drop superstitions and myths and be skeptical, have conscience of the reason power. I love astronomy not just by what it are is, but also by the way it makes me be.
I will end with a phase that I like much:
"The sky calls to us. If we do not destroy ourselves, we will one day venture to the stars.", Sagan, C.
I'm grateful to who have has the patience to correct this big note <30 votedNovember 3, 20152Beaches in Mexico
I live in México near the beach, here in my city it is very common to go to spend the holidays in on the beach, many people go to Cancun in the summer and Christmas but many more go to the Yucatan beaches because have there are fewer tourists there.
It's great to have the beach so close, we just need to drive for 30 minutes and arrive to her.
A lot of families of my city have more than 1 house and frequently usually one of their houses are in is on the beach. so, in the weekends they go to their houses in on the beach and come back to the city on sunday afternoon.
I love the beach and I want to have a house there when I grow up.. a little bit more :)
If you come to Mexico you should visit the beach ( it's better to be near to the gulf if you take my opinion) and of course Chichén Itzá <3 .. but that is another history story because Mexico has a great diversity of places, evironments, cultures and gastronomy.
So thinking in about that.. you should visit Mexico ;)
Greetings0 votedOctober 29, 20150A true news
Today I saw a piece of news in the on Wechat about "A young couple opened a restaurateur restaurant and generated an income of five hundred thousand yuan a year". It's true, because I saw in the newspaper, but I can't believe they are my junior high school classmates.
0 votedOctober 28, 20151Chinese Education System and Chinese Students
Every family has endless household chores to do. Whether high schools students should help their parents with them or not is always a hot debate in China. Considering China's education system and the tremendous amount of homeworks a Chinese student has to do a day, I would say it's better not asking them to do houseworks at least when they are in high school.
China's education system make the issue of students focusing only on their school work more worthwhile. One distinct feature of thing about our education system is the College Entrance Exam. What universities Chinese students will go to totally depends on their performances, in other words their scores, on that exam. Universities in China will only look at a student's score rather than their personalities, specialites and other features qualities. In this case, the importance of working extremly hard on their at school work and achieving a high score goes without saying. It's just better if they only focus on working out homework problems. It will be more rewardable if they can trade their intensely hard work for a higher score and thus getting into a better university.
Since our education system promises Chinese students better future if they get higher scores in the College Entrance Exam, for their parents, they are just being more responsible if they can spend all of their energy and time on study. That's the reason why most Chinese parent never ask their children help do houseworks, especially when they are in high school. On the contrary, they will think their children are better sons or daughters if they use all of their time to study.
China's education system is somewhat different from other countries's in that only students performances on an exam during the several hours will be taken into consideration for unversities admission to admit students. Under this circumstance, it's a better option for Chinese high school students to focus on homework. That's the reason why they are not expected to do household chores.Your essay is really great. Though there's still a little bit of redundancies on how the idea is presented.
Those minor corrections are just for the sentence to go a little more smoothly (in my humble opinion)
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