Chinese Education System and Chinese Students

Every family has endless household chores to do. Whether high schools students should help their parents with them or not is always a hot debate in China. Considering China's education system and the tremendous amount of homeworks a Chinese student has to do a day, I would say it's better not asking them to do houseworks at least when they are in high school.

China's education system make the issue of students focusing only on their school work more worthwhile. One distinct feature of thing about our education system is the College Entrance Exam. What universities Chinese students will go to totally depends on their performances, in other words their scores, on that exam. Universities in China will only look at a student's score rather than their personalities, specialites and other features qualities. In this case, the importance of working extremly hard on their at school work and achieving a high score goes without saying. It's just better if they only focus on working out homework problems. It will be more rewardable if they can trade their intensely hard work for a higher score and thus getting into a better university.

Since our education system promises Chinese students better future if they get higher scores in the College Entrance Exam, for their parents, they are just being more responsible if they can spend all of their energy and time on study. That's the reason why most Chinese parent never ask their children help do houseworks, especially when they are in high school. On the contrary, they will think their children are better sons or daughters if they use all of their time to study.

China's education system is somewhat different from other countries's in that only students performances on an exam during the several hours will be taken into consideration for unversities admission to admit students. Under this circumstance, it's a better option for Chinese high school students to focus on homework. That's the reason why they are not expected to do household chores.

Your essay is really great. Though there's still a little bit of redundancies on how the idea is presented. 

Those minor corrections are just for the sentence to go a little more smoothly (in my humble opinion) 

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