Please help me correct !!!

I write to preparing prepare for the test tomorrow . Yesterday my teacher said it isn't wasn't quite good but now she can't help me . So I hope anyone can make suggestions

Daily activities

Every morning , I often get up at 8 o'clock. Then I take a bus order to go to school . And I can usually eat some sandwiches for breakfast when I'm waiting on the way. If I have classes all day , I will have lunch at the food stores. but in return Otherwise, I will get home straightaway.

In the evening after school my family have dinner together at 5 pm . After And an hour later, I have to go to study English at Uc-Anh center . It takes me about 10 minutes to go there on foot . On Monday, Wednesday and Friday, I study by myself from 7 :30 to 8 :30 at the family mart . However My English class finishs at 9 o'clock is on Tuesday , Thursday and Saturday. It usually finishes at 9pm (2 câu từ "My English class..." nên để lên trước câu "On Monday...")

On the weekend , sometimes I hold a small party or go put hang out with my friends . Badminton and kungfu are our favorite sports which we choose to play in the free time We play it a lot in our free time.

At home , I always help my mother do my houseworks . Finally , The day ends with me reading books and preparing lessons before bedtime . I'm glad happy with my life